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Deucalion02
2009-09-08 . chapter 8
i like the fic but when is it going to update again or the other version hells one true love. and is it going to turn out as a ranma is a demon fic?
and will he gain control of his curse and the nekoken. if you decide to respond but dont want to bother with the fic send me an email at or a im at deucalion02 on yahoo messenger. thanks for taking the time to read this reveiw.
Tri-Emperor of The Twilight
2008-12-18 . chapter 8
Very interesting.
elrail
2008-09-29 . chapter 8
keep up the good work
chrimzon angel
2008-07-09 . chapter 8
the amazon names are a joke right? and i dare you to have hild befriend nabiki.
Cyrus Majin
2008-07-05 . chapter 5
I noticed some inaccuracies in your companion chapter to explain norse myth... Specifically, the Vanir were deities, not giants, in their own right that fought with the Aesir, but not during Ragnorok. Freya (who you are saying became Hild) was a Vanir who, with her brother, Freyr, lived amongst the Aesir after they had made piece. However, you were correct that the Aesir fought against a group of giants, specifically the ice-giants lead by Loki. Just thought this would let you more acuratly indicate what changes you made to Norse myth (not not suggesting that you change the story on this basis).
QundraDraconum
2008-06-08 . chapter 8
Well it's been a year so I'm fairly sure you aren't going to update this. Just thought I'd let you know that I like the story. The attraction to Ranma is almost an aside here though. You mention she likes him but she barely interacts with him. I love how you dealt with Shampoo though. Good job.
SeeraaMuunFan
2007-09-09 . chapter 8
Good story so far. By the way, I'm sure there are people that wanna see another update, so keep it coming, at least for their sake. xD
Also, as a suggestion, if you have yet to work on ideas for future chapters, apply some of the events that take place in the manga. There are a lot of good situations that happen revolving around deviations of opposing groups to the three Norns and Keiichi, so applying Hel-gumi as the antagonist of said encounters.

Looking forward to your next update. 8D
harry shall rise
2007-09-01 . chapter 8
Great story.. going to bed now, update soon!.
Princess Asuna
2007-08-02 . chapter 8
damn, nice chapter, i cant wait to see what happens next and whay punishment ranma-chan decides on for shampoo and the "old ghoul" lol ^_^ keep up the good work
Sargon Dorsai
2007-08-01 . chapter 8
I wonder if Loki and crew remembered to do their research on one Ranma Saotome before deciding that he needed to be killed. And while the divine beings may not be able to protect him, Ranma is more than capable of protecting himself. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens at the restaurant. Should be an interesting confrontation with the Amazon elders, Hild, Mara and Ranma all there. Not to mention those who just seems to arrive in Ranma's life.

I like the way that things are developing. Hild is working towards resolutions for the dilemmas in Ranma's life, and even though the solutions aren't perfect, that's life. Ranma is realizing that even he can't protect everyone from everything. That path only leads to disaster.

Poor Ukyo.
RanmaChaos
2007-07-31 . chapter 8
Good chapter!!Please continue to UPDATE!!
Blackdex
2007-07-31 . chapter 8
Best authentic American cuisine? Well, the Wendy’s are pretty much the same, Maku do (McDonalds) however is quite radically different (shrimp burgers, for one). Uh, there are a couple more expensive ones, but you really cant get much more American than five pounds of lard on two stale buns (and anything in Tokyo proper cost an arm and a leg to begin with). Oh yeah, good work so far. Ciao
Wonderbee31
2007-07-30 . chapter 8
Well, looks like Loki is going to push forward, and will be looking forward to seeing what will happen when things go to blazes, and here's hoping that Hild will smack the jerk down hard afterwards.
Sean Malloy-1
2007-07-30 . chapter 8
I'm slightly surprised that you named character "Moisturizer"; other than that, great work. I hope you'll add more soon.

I hope you get better soon.
taxzombie
2007-07-29 . chapter 8
Well, lets see now, Hild along with Ranma and three matriarch's and I doubt that the male amazon is a slouch so I would hazard to guess that Loki's plans are about to go fubar.

Looking forward to reading the next chapter. I expect it will be an interesting one.
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