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| Updates-Please 2008-03-11 ch 8,  | abuseAbsolutely brilliant. I loved this chapter. Looking forward to see wht happens next. Update! |
| butterflyswest 2008-03-10 ch 8, | abuseOh I cant wait to see what happens |
| xblissfuloblivion 2008-03-08 ch 8, | abuseI'm REALLY intrigued to find out exactly what Chloe's plan is and after the last chapter I really have NO idea... I hope you'll update soon! (: |
| dshortklutz 2008-03-08 ch 8, | abuseNow I'm curious just what she is going to do to him that she isn't going to want to be there when he gets back. I also hope his conversation with Neela turns out okay and that she doesn't get too upset when she finds out about Ella. |
| DocRock06 2008-03-08 ch 8, | abuseI'm glad that Neela and Ray have a chance at getting together, but I feel so sorry for Ray when he gets back and finds out that she is gone. Update again when you can please :D DocRock06 |
| dshortklutz 2008-03-08 ch 7, | abuseI wonder what Chloe is going to do to Ray and what scheme are she and Abby going to come up with to get him and Neela together. I also can't wait to for Neela's reaction to Ella. |
| heatherlynn28 2007-12-01 ch 7, | abusethat was sweet want ray and neela back together neela would be a great step-mom.heather |
| Updates-Please 2007-11-27 ch 7, | abuseAre you serious? Out of all the things Chloe was going to tell Abby that was not one that crossed my mind. Brilliant idea though. Poor Chloe? I can see how anyone would fall for Ray. I absolutely loved this chapter. You have to update soon! |
| butterflyswest 2007-11-26 ch 7, | abuseOk really want to see where this goes! |
| lillianne 2007-11-26 ch 7, | abuseOk, that explains some things but I hope that there will not be 'another' love triangle/rectangle! |
| siddika 2007-11-26 ch 7, | abuseAmazing job. |
| DocRock06 2007-11-26 ch 7, | abuseGreat chapter! And i DIDN'T see that one coming! Update soon please! DockRock06 |
| starryjen 2007-09-19 ch 6, | abuseYou've got me really intrigued with this story, can't wait for more |
| Beaglicious 2007-09-14 ch 6, | abuseThis story continues to intrigue me - I can't wait to find out who Becca is and how she plays into this whole thing. Somehow, I'm still not convinced that things are as they seem with Ray and Chloe. There's something else going on there - and I can't wait to find out (hint, hint)! Nice job continuing to develop the characters. Can't wait to see the next Ray-Neela scene now that he knows! |
| Updates-Please 2007-09-14 ch 6, | abuseI'm intrigued. Keep up the good work. Update soon. |