Well you've certainly caught my attention. I discovered you on AFF net and happily followed you over to here only to spend my entire evening reading the Matrix. Love your writing, I would have commented on your other stories but I don't have an account there...sorry. Keep writing in some form or another and be kind by sticking with the femslash ;D (just cause I like it most) you keep me up past my bedtime and now I'm delirious, thanks! Really, thanks :)

that was... wow. loved the ending lol duh. liked the story its an interesting crossover of the matrix and KP. not really a fan of the matrix, but you made it bearable. i enjoyed reading this.

wow, this is an amazing story. please update soon ^^

(This is for all chapters)That was excellent. Can't wait for a continuation.

I, personally, felt that you should leave the "part good/part evil" thing to "Star Wars", but if you want to continue with that in this story, then by all means, go ahead, because it's beautifully depicted here, especially in this chapter. Plus, when Kim wakes up & finds herself in that pod, I hear "One" by Metallica playing in my head. If you've heard the song, then you know what I'm getting at. But still, great story, & I wait for Chapter 7.

Nice story. I had a power outage due to a storm and was utterly pissed that it interuped my reading of this. Well I eventually got back online it and finished reading this. I hope you can continue this soon, thanks for writing this, good bye for now.

I love your writing and the detail that you put into it. The little classical and cultural references you use are educational too. Who says fanfiction is just recreation? =p. This was a great chapter! Obviously since the KiGo is in abundance. Please keep it up.

Nice, I like. Hope to read more.

Great chapter. Outstanding in fact. I wish I had your grasp of detail, alas, I don't.

I do have a small grievance I must voice: While kim was using the Katana. I have been taught to NEVER swing it like a baseball bat. Ever. Just no. But I'm going to call it suspension of disbelief and pretend that Kim was never uploaded with a program of how to fight with one.

Other than that, very, very good. I look forward to the next chapter.

Has it really been fifty thousand words in five chapters and a prologue? This feels like the BEGINING. Where will this go now?

aw! i haven't read this story til now, but i love it! i do hope to hear from you soon :)

a great story. I was wondering about ron. cuz things really didn't seem odd with him while they were in the matrix, so i was wondring about his sudden change. it was also really easy to feel for shego. i especially liked how she's sad about drakken. i've always found an oddly likable side to drakken. mostly though, i really loved that last scene with kim as she crawled into the bed. i eagerly look forward to the next part.

one things though. while i do not claim to be an expert in hindoism, I though Brahma was the god of creation, and Vishnu was the god of prevervation?

I never read this fic as I am not too into crossovers but I like this and your writing a lot since it still has the KiGo and I do like the Matrix films of course. Cant wait for the next chapter =) though I will inevitably have to =p.

though not one for crossovers of any kind except for rare occurances i find my self drawn to this fic. It takes what i found promising from the movie and seems to make it more personal than i found in them at the same time. i can't wait to see the next chapter and how you handle the morning after. cant wait for the next chapter later

yay feelings next chapter ^^
wow this chapter was great. Very well thought out, I'm impressed.
I eagerly await the coming of the next chapter