Well it is a good little story, but anyone could take this idea and make a whole novel out of it, you understand me? Good writings often come with hard work and devolopment.

The pairing is interesting. I have never considered it before!

But (and you've probably heard this dozens of time) I think it was really... short. From what I've read, you're awesome at narrating, but there was no dialogue, and well... I couldn't feel the chemistry between the two. I liked the last line however, it was cute :)

Also when using Young Link's name, you have to capitalize the "Young" since it's a part of his name.

At least that's what I think.

Well, good job! I think next time you do a one-shot it should include dialogue and it should definitely be longer!

It's very cute, but way too short! : )

Well I can't say I like the pairing. But I don't judge people based on their pairings. This was way too short. Maybe you could have added a bit more dialogue and detail. It seems kind of like, a brief minute composition. This is in no way a flame, but constructive criticism.