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| kt187 2008-05-24 ch 7, | abuseKeep writing this story, it is really good! How did Dumbledore know to ask Dawn about the Key?? She is just a teenager after all! What did Faith reveal?? Did they ask her about the Key?? PLEASE PLEASE post a new chapter soon!! Can't wait to read it! |
| Dax 2007-08-23 ch 7, anon. | abuse:-). |
| JoBrOs.JuNkIe 2007-08-04 ch 7, | abuseintriguing i like it i love the fact thats its Faith with Dawn instead of Buffy and that Tonks is in it i would love to see an update of it soon i really enjoy it keep up the good work and please update soon |
| Faith5321 2007-06-13 ch 7, | abuseVery nice fanfic, i haven't read a fanfic that i liked in a while that's also being updated lol so jay! |
| Silent Me 2007-06-13 ch 7, | abuseAn amazing chapter. I can't wait for the next one! |
| Allen Pitt 2007-06-12 ch 7, | abuseI'd think Faith would take exception to how they've just treated Dawn --and it doesn't take much to rouse her temper- presumably they questioned her already & found out about her dark past...but a threat to Dawn...she'll get upset. (nice bit about Snape's reaction to D on the dark magic user question)- Strange to think- in a little while, Buffy might show up with a bunch of slayers (post chosen) and get really mad about how the Ministry has been treating Dawn- |
| Dragonsdaughter1 2007-06-08 ch 6, | abuseHehehehehehehe! |
| reader 2007-06-03 ch 6, anon. | abuseo. intrigue. can't wait for some hogwarts/draco interaction. |
| Allen Pitt 2007-06-02 ch 6, | abusePoor Hogwarts-- the whole "chosen" thing happened very very soon after B. got the medallion.. (so in effect Dawn was sent off with Faith instead of with an easily-tasered Xander. Heh). We definitely need Dawn to kick buffy in the shins the next time they meet. Next up: a very very nasty team of lawyers from W&H should show up. Maybe led by Lilah, let ouf of dead-W&H lawyer-hell just for this... also having a Howler from Angel(us) and/or Spike arrive should make for fun *Might be fun if Dawn reads that book of prophecies and finds one on "the Key"... (especially since nobody at the castle knows what she really is yet).. --hey! Is Sir Cadogan (knight in one of the portraits, Book #3) a "Knight of Byzantium"? Heh heh... Imagne if he 'recognized' her... * Connor could show up--got an owl & a "gee, how could we have missed him when he was 11? Weird!" |
| Silent Me 2007-06-02 ch 6, | abuseGreat chapter! |
| crazypumps 2007-06-01 ch 4, anon. | abusei really love your story so far. cant wait for what comes next. keep it up |
| Silent Me 2007-05-31 ch 5, | abuseI definitely gotta say that I love the idea of Dawn and Faith in England on this adventure. It's different from other stories and I really like how you've portrayed the characters so far. Great job! |
| Allen Pitt 2007-05-31 ch 5, | abusehm, one wonders why Snape left so abruptly...maybe he knows something...? Oh, and "Vol de mort" ..I'd think that's more French than Latin. But that's a really really minor point... * on the 'spy' thing, one would think they'd check to see if eithe are witches, & my guess is Dawn would be able to use a wand --she's got more 'magical core' than any of them, probably. heh... she IS a magical core... if DD & Snape have heard of the Key... it'd probably be like finding out there's an atomic bomb in the room... they'd react to that news...my guess is she'd be very very powerful using a wand- By this point the watchers council has likely been blown up... so the Ministry has nobody to contact ... Dawn should try asking if she can write to her sister, they'd probably lend an owl... |
| Silent Me 2007-05-28 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter! |
| Allen Pitt 2007-05-28 ch 4, | abusewell, Giles might have more than one place, aside from the one in Bath--he was pulling down 2 salaries for years after all ( school libararian + watcher, then revenue from the magic shoppe) -- * The 'you know who, no I don't' thing is like the "who's on first base' Abbott & Costello joke, isn't it?... huh. Strange that they'd ask Faith if she was 'an evil slayer' --have there been such in the past? Or have they just heard garbled reports about Faith from a few years before? That could get majorly awkward. and is it that faith "can't" be a slayer? Do they know about Buffy & think there are no others? Next up: why was Dawn "drawn" to the village, and all that stuff... Will Faith get violent if they administer veritaserum to Dawn & she doesn't like the questions? |