 Freebird87 2007-10-18 . chapter 5Is Marty's sister Linda named after William's sister? |
 Freebird87 2007-10-18 . chapter 1I think Claudia Wells is prettier than Elisabeth Shue. |
 D.J. Scales 2007-06-26 . chapter 6Am I the only one who bothered to review this entire story? |
 D.J. Scales 2007-06-13 . chapter 14Nice ending to this story. Are you ever going to put a prolouge chapter of the next generation part 2? |
 D.J. Scales 2007-06-13 . chapter 13So tell me do Todd and Jennifer get married or does Todd get Jennifer Peabody pregnant. Finally you mentioned the whole Marty wanting to warn Tiff about being Raped issue. |
 D.J. Scales 2007-06-12 . chapter 12Well now we know why the Stricklands never seemed to be to nice even though Gerald Strickland was nicer than his grandson and even nicer than his decendent from the far future Jeb Strickland. |
 D.J. Scales 2007-06-12 . chapter 11Nice work with this chapter. I really like how you introduced more of Jennifer's ancestors. |
 D.J. Scales 2007-06-11 . chapter 10Is this the end of the story? |
 D.J. Scales 2007-06-08 . chapter 9Nice job right here using the frendly responce. Hey can you do a sequeal to this story in which Marty and Jennifer meet their future Grandchildren and Grand nieces and nephews if possible. Hey could you use that idea for the next generaton trilogy as well? |
 D.J. Scales 2007-06-08 . chapter 8Nice job on having Clara Parker show up to mention how she was raped by Buford Tannen. Now i see where Jennifer gets her firey temper from. For the record, if Jennifer Peabody does have a child out of wedlock then who is the father? |
 D.J. Scales 2007-06-08 . chapter 7Loved the first scenerao for this chapter of will breaking up with jennifer peabody. |
 D.J. Scales 2007-06-04 . chapter 5so is Charlie going to chalange Marty to a fight only to run into trouble from his mom? |
 D.J. Scales 2007-06-02 . chapter 4Geeze why doesn't Marty just warn Tiffany Gertrude Tannen that she'll end up being raped by Charlie Needles for pete sakes. Hey here's an idea why not have one of Douglas Needles decendents have a son who is actually nice like bill tannen for the Next Generation Part 2? |
 D.J. Scales 2007-06-01 . chapter 3Hey isn't Charlie Needles going to make his apperence in the next chapter and say the same line that Buford once said? |
 D.J. Scales 2007-05-31 . chapter 2Speaking of Tiffany Tannen is she going to become the victim of an attempted rape in this story or not? |