This is not the first time I've read this wonderful story but it's the first time I've felt the urge to comment on this particular chapter, specifically about Quistis's struggles.

As someone who has dealt with suicide before, I recognize Quistis's cheerful behaviour all too well. The way she outwardly portrays a happy, cheerful self to her peers, maybe even unknowingly, her mannerisms putting them slightly at ease. Even though the fact that the reason for that happiness comes from her thoughts of "freeing" herself.

While the slightly schizophrenic portrayal isn't very realistic, the overall situation you present IS. I have felt similarly for earlier chapters but this one hits incredibly hard and I find it hard to keep the odd tear from forming in the corner of my eye.

Great job. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter of Remastered.

Aw, that was cute. I liked Fujin's confession of being unable to express her feelings well...even though it's kind of obvious :P It's also funny how Fujin says 'APOLOGY' instead of 'SORRY', but it does suit her lol.

Hehe, Fujin is pretty adorable, the way you're writing her and this story :P. As is Laguna. His awkwardness right when he entered the story amused me.

I liked this part, too:

Quistis chuckled softly and looked down at her.

"I made poopy." The girl announced proudly. Quistis hung her head in dismay.

It's 'Galbadia', not Galbania. And were Fujin and Raijin at the orphanage, too? :/..I thought it was just Squall, Selphie, Irvine, Quistis, Zell, Seifer, and Ellone. And I don't remember Rinoa becoming a SeeD in the game...I don't think she'd want to be a SeeD, at least. There are also a lot of grammatical errors/typos. Anyway, good chapter. Rinoa does seem to have weird taste in men...

Haha, I loved this bit:

"Ignore him he's just retarded." Selphie grinned as she pushed him away.

"Hey now." Irvine stammered slightly offended.

"Guys really, just surprise me it's okay, just no stripper like last time."

"Sorry about that." Irvine said. "Did the stain come out?"

The two girls looked at him sourly. He threw his hands up defensively.

"Okay, Okay I'm shutting up."

Selphie stared at him a moment before continuing.

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I like that you're not focusing too much on just Quistis and Fujin, although I hope you focus a bit more on them soon, to balance it out.

I love this story so far. It's a bit intimidating to read because of the length, but it definitely seems worth it so far. The only thing that bugged me is Zell's library girlfriend having an American name. It just feels out of place in a final fantasy story..it shouldn't be such a normal name.

The guy at the club calling himself 'Squall Lionhead' cracked me up, and it was funny how they ended up not going anyway just because of Selphie looking too young. I don't know how I feel about your interpretations of some of the characters yet, though (like Selphie (going to a strip club?) and Zell (giving Squall a lap dance?)). But I do like your Fujin and Quistis interaction so far. Especially Quistis's mortification at calling her 'Fuu' haha. That was cute. And then the awkward doorway chat between Fujin and Rinoa XD...

Wow I loved this story and can't wait for the sequel! I read it in 3 days and was so sad when I reached the end. Hope the next one won't take too long to appear.

Once again great story!

It took me a little under a month, but I finally finised Frozen! And I LOVED IT SO MUCH! Thank you for writing it, I was entranced. I never really considered the pairing while playing the game, but Quistis and Fujin are so cute together. Thank you for writing this. But I do have a question. You keep mentioning a personal website of yours that has all this awesome fanart and stuff on it, but FF.Net always deletes links and addresses. What is your site, where is it? I'd love to know!

Nice chapter, but all the drama with kevin seems a bit forced. I mean, why can't she just tell him she's not interested and get it over with?

I like your story so far. Unfortunately the frequent errors of spelling and grammar make reading it slightly painful.

Please get an editor for any subsequent writing you're planning on doing.

ok i dont usualy comment untill the end or the last posted chaptor but... omg i love the end of this 1. HAHAHA i had to re read it 5 times. "The hell he's not!" hahahahahaha i love it XD this is awsome. i love this story. iv been going for 3 days strat and am only at Ch.53 3 this is my first FF8 story and i never made it past shoing Selfy around in the game so this is realy making me fall inlove with ff8 for the first time. thank u so much for sharing this amazing story. i know when i reech the end ill be sad to see it go. see u at the finish line

Love Rain

Vaguely, it seems... almost... unchartered.

How interesting. :D

I cannot possible express in words how absolutely elated I am at the thought of a continuation of this lovely story! I remember myself being bound to my screen after I had found your questionable masterpiece.

I say "Questionable" because of the lack of proper grammar in certain places, some misspelling and such. Still, you made up for it all with an incredibly captivating story and that, my dear writer, is a rather huge compliment coming from me, seeing as over the years I've gotten more and more picky regarding my choice of faniction and suffice to say...well, Frozen is the only story I can keep reading even today without being bothered by a little faulty grammar here or some misspelled words there. I believe that it is the plot and character-presentation that keeps me coming back for more, even though I have already read it several times.

As such, I would be honoured to aid you in any way I may possibly be capable of, beta-reading or proof-reading, if you would ever need a little extra help. I assure you that I have quite the heap of free time on my hands, as of late.

P.S. Please don't be alarmed by my somewhat posh writing, I'm not as arrogant as I may appear to be.

Oh Frozen... so many countless nights of sleep you took away from me because of obsessive reading... but it was all worth it! I basically read through the whole thing in about a week or so. Like many said before, the grammar is pretty bad, but the story is freaking amazing. It's so epic on so many levels. You some how managed to make Quistis and Fujin a completely plausible couple - a rare feat indeed. The characters are all well fleshed out. Quistis and Fujin are easy to connect with. Zell is my hero. And the girls are probably the caddiest bitches I've ever read, specifically Rinoa lol Out of all the story lines and arcs in this fic, Quistis' attempt at suicide really stands out for me. It's just so powerful, that I can't get over it. The way it was written and the events that led up to it were so well done and believable, I must give you a round of applause. Overall, this fanfiction was amazing! It is definitely at the top of my list of favorite fanfiction. I can't wait to read the "remastered edtion"! :)