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Zell_21
2009-10-12 . chapter 48
HEY Chendzeea! I was following your story when you first started submitting chapters. Now this is my second time reading it years later. Man you are awesome. You're writing style and descriptive abilities are terrific and your presentation of the characters is spot on. Just had to stop and tell you again how much I love this fic. Don't know where you're at but I hope you're doing well
Aerispureheart
2009-09-28 . chapter 100
Hey, I never thought that I would read a FujinXQuistis fanfic but when I saw how many reviews you have...I just knew your story had to have something special to it. And so, I read your entire fic in a week, completely engrossed and fascinated. You are an amazing writer and I'd like to thank you for writing this beautiful love story. ~Kan
Sue
2009-09-14 . chapter 100
I don't remember my login info, and I browsed through some of your reviews and saw that you can have unverified reviews. YAY.

This is either my second or third time reading this story. I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! I saw a review where someone asked why they read through a story with bad grammar... I agree. >_>

That's just a testament to how amazing this story is. :D You wrote an AMAZING story where you truly FEEL what the characters are feeling. The end of the Tyranous story arc nearly made me cry, and that's extremely difficult! <_< Quistis and Fujin... I'm not so sure that I would've come up with that couple on my own (though I <3 shoujo ai), but I can say that there isn't a couple that makes more sense :)

Thank you so much for writing the most beautiful story on , and really, ever ^_^ I've read it nearly nonstop for the last 4 days or so. I am so glad that I remembered that this piece of art is on this site. I can't even type how much this story is worth. I truly love it. And thank you for the amazing ride that this novel has been. I'll always remember it. :)
Sydney1590
2009-07-16 . chapter 43
You. I love you. Yet dislike you. D:

This is a great story! It's one of those ones that make you want to read ya know? And plus it's not going to fast like most stories here. Really, i love it a lot. Great job~!

But for the reason i dislike you. It really takes a long time to finish D: it's my third day reading and it takes me a long time!

But for real. I love it. and i haven't even played/watched someone play this game! :D so even better job in it!

I think im going to get the game..
Big-Babidi
2009-07-08 . chapter 100
Aside from some grammar and formatting issues, this is one excellent story. Thank you for writing and posting this online.
Xshu
2009-05-20 . chapter 1
Err... I meant FFVI's plot in my last review. Woops.

Ahh, I feel like I should be heaping more praise on this story, but what could I say that you haven't heard before? I'm torn between starting Requiem or not. On the one hand, I just want more Frozen! Even all 100 chapters weren't enough for me, it seems. On the other hand, Requiem is sad and isn't finished. Also I'm not sure where I could still find it. Maybe the Shojo Ai forums? Hmm... Best not to read it, I suppose. Still... Gah! It's too bad you don't have any of those mini-stories written. Oh well. Best of luck in whatever you're doing these days!
Xshu
2009-05-20 . chapter 100
Every time I start reading this fanfic I scoff at how silly I must have been for making it all the way through a story with such poor grammar, and then every time I finish it I scold myself for ever having doubting how amazing it is. The grammar is pretty poor for the first half (Galbania? *snicker*) and even a little sub-par in some of the later chapters (the occasional loose instead of lose, or random quotation marks missing or where they shouldn't be). There are one or two contradictions with FFVI's plot, too, and even some little OOC moments. You know that, though, and really? It just doesn't matter. It doesn't stop the story's sheer charm, lovable characters, and engaging storytelling from making it one of my all-time favorites. To this day the "Tyranous" arc leaves me near tears with how it ends, the NORG arc has me on the edge of my seat with how vividly everything is depicted, and the Grandia arc is so adorable it leaves me hugging myself in glee. I cannot recommend this story highly enough.

I'd really love to read that revised version I saw you mention a few years back, though the last time you mentioned still writing it was back in 2007, so I won't get my hopes up. Okay, that was a dirty lie: My hopes are sky high. Anyways, While the grammar and mild plot errors don't stop the story from being beautiful, a little polish would easily make this the greatest Final Fantasy story I've ever seen; including the games themselves.
Raven 2584
2009-02-25 . chapter 100
I've read this story a couple of times just never reviewed before. It is an excellent story. I loved every chapter. I wish you wouild of went through with the sequal. I would love to have seen how some things panned out. Well you can't get everything. I'll say it again excellent excellent story.
KlutzyGirl
2009-01-29 . chapter 100
I have to say, I'm a pretty lazy ff user. I love reading fics but am always too lazy to log in and review stories, but i have to say I just HAD to review yours.

I had found this fic a few years ago when I first started playing FFVI, but I was young then, and seeing the long chapters and that there were 100 of them, I just didn't have the patience. I don't know what got me to find it again, I seriously can't recall, but last Thursday, I looked it up on a whim, and I just couldn't stop myself. From Thursday till yesterday I would be reading this story whenever I could. I'd skip out on homework and stay up till 3 in the morning just reading. It was gripping, never dull, always kept me wanting more, so it was very hard to just close my laptop to get some shut eye. I love this story to death!! I don't think I've ever read a fanfic or a book or anything that kept me going like this one!! I can't believe how much I've read in less than a week!!

Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. I laughed, I cried, I worried, I pretty much felt every emotion possible. I'm so sad that it's over, but I couldn't be happier with how it ended.

I just wished we'd got to see Fujin write Quistis a poem or see what Fujin wrote in her diary that she shared with Quists. I think those would have been precious moments.

I must say, in such a short time, I've invested so much into these characters I don't want it to end!! I want to know more! I want to know what lies ahead for them! I want to know if they end up having a family!! I want to continue their journey!! But you can't always get what you want now can you? But take this as a compliment because you've fleshed them out so well. They are officially my favourite FFVI pairing.

Again, thank you for the wonderful story.
EroSlackerMicha
2008-06-28 . chapter 100
I remember reading this some time ago, and took me a bit to find it again. but I sat and read the whole thing in one setting. (my eyes are protesting that I sleep) but I will say this is the best damn FFVI story EVER.
I love how you paired Quis and Fu, and all I can say is that you are the best. I recall you had a sequel started, but canned it. (sigh) and the world became a bit more darker with the loss of such awesome work. But Frozen is the best ever, and know that no one has come close, (even squarenix).
Again great story, great work.
ianob
2008-06-18 . chapter 100
hey, just read through this over the last few days, and i have to say, its excellent!
you've managed to keep some action, without writing a micheal bay script, and wrote in alot of development, without the characters changing into someone new.

seriously, first FFVI fiction i've read here, and i'm actually dissapointed there isn't another 400k sequel squirreled away.
thanks for writing, i enjoyed reading it.
Doug
2008-02-07 . chapter 100
That was a frickin awesome story
NSQueen119
2007-10-25 . chapter 100
I found this on a whim, just looking for something interesting to read.
This was incredible. The characters from the game were fleshed out and given irresistible personalities. Fresh faces were introduced in such a way that I felt just as attached to them as the FFVI staples. I will admit that I've cried in the course of reading, but I've also laughed at the humour and screamed in frustration.
The situations, though Science Fiction in basis, are explained in such a way that it seems that they are simply natural. There are no hackneyed plots or half-baked scenarios.
It was an incredible experience reading, and longing for more.
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to have something to look forward to, to start the morning with, to sneak in at work, and to finish a few chapters before bed.
My dear, you have a wonderful talent. Thank you for sharing it.
ch33syn1ps
2007-10-14 . chapter 15
Well... I finished reading your story in one sitting...I was up all night but I couldn't seem to tear myself away from it!
I never thought this particular pairing could work but after reading your amazing story it's my favorite! The chemistry between Quistis and Fujin works really well. I love how much depth you've given both of them. They're both paradigms of complexity. The pace of the story is perfect. They're both battle worn from emotional scars...Fujin stepping out of her shell and Quistis becoming more confident in who she is.
Your story made me laugh, cry, smile, angry...It's not very often I come across a story that really captivates me.
Also, the rest of the gang; Zell, Squall, Rinoa, Irvine, Seifer, Celes, etc... are hilarious. You managed to really capture the same personalities the original game had set for each of them, except you really nailed it home. I love how you reflected on each of their own dilemmas, insecurities and relationship problems. The girl talk, the guy talk, the love triangles, everything, was perfect and so realistic.
Well, I'm about to read it again...
Thank you for sharing this with us :)
Pretend2besome1
2007-08-19 . chapter 100
I must say that I was really amazed with your fic. It was beautiful how you wrote Fujin and Quistis relationship and to say it was beautiful is an understatement. I was really touched by Fujin when she never give up on Quistis while she’s in a coma and always there by her side, it nearly made me in tears, how much pain she must endure to go trough it. I’m really happy when Fujin gave Quistis the ring, being a hopeless romantic that I am it was such a joy that their relationship is brought to a serious level (if you know what I mean) even when they’re serious from the start. I even feel jealous that they love each other greatly and their love is so strong *sigh happily*

To be honest at first I was not sure whether I will read your fic or not since it was really long and I usually don’t really like reading a fic that’s too long but I’m glad I took the chance because it was totally worth it =)

You’ve made me favorite this couple when I didn’t really give much thought for Fujin/Quistis pairing before. Thank you for writing such a wonderful fic it touched me deeply and bring out many emotions in me that I haven’t felt for some time.

And if you ever make a sequel then I wish to see it and I’ll be more than happy to read it.

Thank you very much again it’s been a great pleasure reading your fic *bows*
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