This was interesting.

I liked how you wrote this from the view point of a character who either doesn't know about the Autobots, or doesn't believe the stories about Transformers.

Cool story. Glad this is completed (one shots are the best because they leave most of what happens next to the imagination of the reader and doesn't leave anyone hanging-nor make everyone impatient for updates when real life interrupts, or the creativity is gone.)

Good story.

I will be honest. I don't know any of the characters, ao I miss out on any of the nuances. On the other hand, I can completely relate to Ivy's comment at the end. good story.

This was so CUTE!

Aww, Bumblebee! And Daniel, they're both so cute! Hehe. I loved it.

Nicely done - I can so see that happening, as I have a 4/5 y/o boy. And I love BB's "uh" reaction.

Bumblebee! Hee hee, I would have been confused too, if I met a little lost kid who insisted Daddy's name was Spike or Bumblebee...

Great job! :)

This story is short, descriptive and humorous...I like it, do you have another in mind?

Very nice, really original.

My one suggestion is that it ended rather abruptly, probably could have used a little more drawing out.

Funny and cute vignette. I can just imagine this as a snapshot from the album of their lives. :D Thank you for sharing it.

HAHAHA! XD I loved the humans' reactions!

That was really cute! I loved it.

That would be kinda cool. You made realistic I like that.

-P.R.

Never fails to crack me up when "normal" people meet the Autobots and the humans they hang around with for the first time, especially if it involves a much younger Daniel. XD

Okay that was very very cute.