It might be a little bit OOC, but only just a little. I really enjoyed it, and I hope you continue to write more in the future.
I bet it's gonna be hard to explain this to Kuwabara, though...

aw. that was so sweet. the ending in particular.

ow, that was so cute! you have a real feeling about Hiei, you described him and the onna so perfectly!
I really liked your fic, I'm gonna read the others!

please more HB! \o/ they are the force of opposite love and deserve new fans! \o/

Oh. My. God. That was fjgherogjnv so adorable!

It's cute! Very well-written, and you kept the characters pretty in-character.

Aw..that was so sweet! I've read alot of HieixBotan stories but this one takes the cake!

That was so cute! I love how it was kind of suspicious (mean, Hiei... Botan... private room!) hhahhaha. but, it was so innocent too. It just made it perfect. So cute! Keep up the amazing work!
-mia

that was so cute!
hiei needs something like that!!
thank you for giving me a mid. day pick me up like this. i was haveing a crummy day untill just now.
thanx :)

aw i love this story. it's very cute i promise you that.

*waterie eyes* sniff... sniff... THAT WAS BEATIEFUL! (can't spell) I love this story! You a fantasic job with it. =^^=

Aw, that was so sweet! I loved it very much and can't wait for your new story and you were right. The title did fit. Keep up the good work!

Midnight!

I thought it was a nice little oneshot. Keep up the good writing
-S-A-K-G:P

awsome story H/B SMEX lol more.

Aw, sweet.

I loved it. You're right, it had nothing to do with being sick, but the title fit it perfectly. I'm very impressed.

I'm excited; I can't wait for your next story!

aw that is really something special, very very cute! i love the intimacy that is totally G-rated! good work