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| peya luna 2008-05-27 ch 16, anon. | abusegreat ending!! though that `i want nieces` part irritates me - how should they get kids?! |
| Ninsg Veen 2008-05-21 ch 16,  | abusealthough I don't think they can get married in their state (it is america after all...) I kinda hope they do. it is fanfiction fantasy land and you could make them do anything you want so... there! chapter is good, it was a lot more satisfying than the previous ones. I'm sorry to say but the fighting kinda put me off. ending was cute so keep up the cuteness and hopefully you write more! *chu* |
| Scottishwriter 2008-04-30 ch 15, | abuseYay! Tommy remembered! Boo! that Merton got hurt... again. Otherwise excellent chapter. Update soon! |
| Scottishwriter 2008-04-25 ch 14, | abuseWhat?! You leave it there? We wait this long and then you leave it like this? You're killing me! I mean great story but man! I'm on the edge of my seat and you end it. Please please update soon. |
| Peya Luna 2008-04-08 ch 13, | abusedamn! do you have to make such an evil cliffie?! i only hope you´ll update soon! |
| peya luna 2008-03-24 ch 13, anon. | abuseWoho! things are heating up, i´m hoping for a good fight ;-) |
| Scottishwriter 2008-03-18 ch 13, | abuseYay another chapter! I've been waiting patiently for this! As always great job and can't wait for your next chapter. Hope there's a little more action though. |
| Peya Luna 2008-02-26 ch 12, | abusenice chapter, but so short! *sniff!* i want to see Merton happy again! |
| Scottishwriter 2008-02-25 ch 12, | abuseYay another chapter! I hope nothing happens to Lori, even if I don't like her. And as always I wish Tommy to remember being with Merton. |
| Scottishwriter 2008-01-31 ch 11, | abuseOk know I feel a little bad for Lori but I'm happy that Tommy and Merton kissed. A little upset that Merton had to trick Tommy into it but still. I hope everything works out ok for everyone. |
| VandySkyXBridge 2008-01-29 ch 11, | abusePlease update soon!! Love this chapter!! Can't wait to find out what happens next, and i'm soo happy that merton might get tommy back!! UPDATE PLEASE!! |
| peya luna 2008-01-29 ch 11, anon. | abuseseems that your plot-bunny returned, right? not only a good progress between Tommy and Merton, but also a dramatic situation for Lori! Yes!!Go on!! |
| Jeremy 2008-01-29 ch 11, anon. | abuseLoved this part. I'm so glas you updated. I can't wait for more. I hope it's soon. |
| J.D 2008-01-29 ch 10, anon. | abuseOh! YAY! Aha! I can't wait until the next one!(!) Aha! |
| FlorCrest 2008-01-19 ch 10, | abuseYou must know I really enjoy this story please o' please keep it up =) |