First of all, this is a good scene to tackle. Wiegraf is a great character who really doesn't get the attention he deserves, and as you said, he wasn't evil until he was possessed by Lucavi. He's just trying to do what's right...equal rights and all that.

I liked this, but it was pretty short. More detail would be a nice addition. The way you handled Wiegraf joining the Shrine Knights seems a bit abrupt. More detail would flesh it out and help the flow. Also, you used two different spellings of Wiegraf-it's best to pick one and be consistent (the one with one f is correct).

Overall, very nice! Great to see Wiegraf getting some time in the limelight!

I think Wiegraf is the best... I liked that aa whole lot, though it was a little on the short side. You're right, Wiegraf wasn't evil. he only turned evil after his sister's demise. Anyway, I suppose he wasn't forced into the whole issue. He fought for what he thought was right... Ah. I have to review. Overall, the storyline is very acceptable. It does follow the context... he became a Temple Knight (Later White knight?) after she was killed, right, or before that... I'm not sure. But that seems the most possible connection of his to Lord Vormav. Izlude may have played a part in it. No Izlude? ;) Anyway, it's quite well written, despite a few spelling errors. In the English translation of the game, Wiegraf is the right spelling. Hope that helped... Keep it up! (What a nitpicker I proved to be... sigh)

Not bad. Though a bit short, it's an interesting look at what might have transpired. Good work. _

Err...that was a bit short. You could make a sequel perhaps. It was pretty good though all things considered..I'd have to replay FFT to see if all the facts match up...but until then.