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Crimson Shards
2007-05-25 . chapter 1
sometimes things are clearest when u suffer. and vegeta's venting seems realistic and any flaws are easily overlooked with that last line...

hell maybe Kakarott was just afraid others would leave him first...
raditz65
2007-05-25 . chapter 1
I like this oneshot

as a side note though, Goku had already said that going to the third level would use up a lot of energy in that world than it would in otherworld and there were some other reasons as well but overall u are correct about everthing you wrote
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