I like this. iT'S interesting.

I can't wait for more.

Hm I'm glad you updated 8D
Vexen/Even is a roller coaster of a person, and everything he does is so interesting when you put it into perspective :D
This is really cool, and Vexen has gotten so much more interesting through your fic ^_^

That was unexpected O_o no comment

I have to say, this is one of my favorite stories on Fanfiction. I think its well written and well thought out. My favorite part of your story is the cleaver dialouge between characters. The fighting is so cleaver it reminds me of Shakespeare. I simply adore the innocence of the Marluxia replica. I saw it coming and didn't want it to happen, though I understand why Vexen did it. The idea that even Marluxia can be sweet is nice. I'm very interested to see the new part of Even's story. The in-between story is genius! I hope the next chapter comes soon,

This is very well written to be honest with you. I feel sorry for the clone, but I understand Vexen's rage after what Marluxia did to him. Made me cry a little bit though. But I hope that's a good thing...

Yeh I just read the fifth chapter, and I think it went really well ^_^ Thanks for re-posting. I'd love to see how Vexen takes care of the replica and if Marluxia will learn anything of it.

Hey, you think you could repost this chapter? I an hardly read it at all because the display's messed up. There are question marks between every letter O_o
I'm asking this because I really love your story but I can't read the 5th chapter, and it's driving me crazy not to be able to tell what's going on T_T So please?

great chapter!! but you should really check your grammar and make some paragraphs that way it would be easier to read. otherwise it was a great chapter!

I'm sure it's another great chapter...
But the thing is the display of words in chapters 4 and 5 are messing up. 4's just enough to be irratating but 5's at the point of illegibility...

I may have to rock on over to DA (assuming it's not posted under MC) and get over the issues with my eyes.

I'll give compliments once I find a place I can actually read it.

great chapter i really enjoyed it! i think you really got their personalities. most people dont XD
but anyway i hope that you will update soon! :3

this is pretty interesting. i hope that you update soon! :3

Wow~ x3 I love this so far. A Marluxia replica certainly seems interest.

Now that sounds like it'll become intresting ((-o Actually, it is already intresting. You have a great writing style and you captured Vexens personality perfectly. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter... |D~ 411... +giggle+