Interesting twist on things. Looking forward to seeing how everyone else takes the news.

WOW that was interesting..never thought Ranma would end up an amazon matriarch LOL. thought it was gonna be like a sage or the official librarian or something of that sort. i have to ask though but plz hurry and make the next part i really am looking forward to it.
-Triangleaznman

Interesting.. Write more.

After reading all three chapters I find I like the way the story is developing but I find it is moving way to fast. The first chapter's pace was great things progressed well and events flowed. But in the second chapter it seemed that you were rushing things to much I mean Akane learning the breaking point technique in less than a day when it took Ryouga almost a week is highly unlikely since it requires a understanding of Ki and a level of self control the Akane has never displayed before, the same is true of the chestnut fist Akane is just not that good. The third chapter is just as bad in how it rushes events together. Then there almost no way that Ranma could become pregnant so quickly at least not to a point that was detectable since human biology dose not work in that way. If the training trip was for a month and a half or so then it would fit more with Akane's ability to learn advance skills and Ranma's ability to teach. It would also make more sense since it would also give Ranma's biological clock time to start ticking and for her body to be in a receptive state for a pregnancy and for that pregnancy to be noticible in Ranma's ki even with no biological indicators. Keep working on it and Ill keep reading, Thanks

i can't see ranma following the always female tradition anymore than absoultely nessecary

Wow - Shan Poo's love is infinite - WOW. Great chapter. Please update soon.

Wow, Ranma's life turned a little more complicated XD
Hope you update soon :D

That was a little too sudden...Should have developed that a little more slowly. As is it just seems too convenient. Still an interesting story but you're moving way too quickly.

hm. interesting

Here's a vote in favor of continuation, if that helps. :)

This is one of the better examples of the "Cursed Akane" fic. I like that Ranma's unconscious sexism is shown, in that she's far more willing to treat male Akane like a real martial artist. Good characterization.

Akane, less so. His character needs more fleshing out. He's a bit generic and doesn't really feel like Akane yet. The first chapter was understandable, he was in shock, but this chapter really didn't show Akane as Akane as much as I'd have liked. I'm not talking about cliche things (bad food, "baka", ect.), but more personality. Akane should have been more frustrated about being outclassed, and more delighted when he started to become Ranma's equal.

I agree with Frank W. L., that the sex should have waited till after the empathy. Prior to that should have been just building up to cuddling. As a couple, they've had little chance for more than hand-holding though all of canon.

Also, Ranma should have needed more time to truly accept that this new male in her life really was the same Akane. It's one thing to know it and another to truly accept it deep down. The quandry you showed them having about their attraction to someone outwardly their own base gender should have happened right before or after their first time, not a week later. For their thoughts, I would have focused more on them admitting to themselves about their feelings for the other person. Less so for Akane since she's only ever known Ranma as both genders, but for Ranma it's a big deal for a man amongst men to be attracted to a male. She really should be rationalizing to herself (and denying her body's reactions) that she loves Akane, not the body he's wearing. Let that sneak up on her.

If I was Ranma I would tell Cologne that if she doesn't fix us then I would shatter, not break, /SHATTER/ Shampoo's tail bone. If you intend to be jumping around you need your tailbone /intact/. Shampoo would never again be the martial artist she once was, she would be a shadow of her former self. To an Amazon it would be a fate worse than death. I would then tell Cologne that if /that/ didn't work I would go to the Amazon village and destroy it, killing everyone there. If she didn't agree I would put action to words. Pretty much everything she has done in the series has been unforgivable in my eyes anyway. This would just be the last straw.

I like it! Keep up the good work.

M

Interesting story. I think the sex between Akane and Ranma happened way too quickly though. Perhaps it should have been delayed until after the Chi transfer, would have made more sense then. The title of the story definitely gets me interested in what might be coming up in the story. I look forward to reading more.

Well, I've put off reading Eezoon, due to formatting, but thought I would try this fic since the formatting is quite a bit better. So far, I like it, although I don't have much more to say as of yet.

One piece of advise, though. This isn't meant to bash Akane (I like Akane, even if I do prefer she ends up with someone other than Ranma most of the time), but it's quite possible that Akane might end up blaming Ranma for what happened when they wake up the next morning, especially since this body was so new to her, as opposed to how much time Ranma's had to get used to her body. It's hard to aptly depict how different the gender's hormones are in power, since there's no Jusenkyo in real life, but most evidence tends to suggest that a man's hormones are more powerful on an instantaneous level. Because of that, Akane might blame Ranma for not taking the initiative to stop what happened.



Whatever happens, I hope to see more soon. Now, on to trudging through Eezoon. :P

(I couldn't find a non version, and have to admit that sucks as far as formatting is concerned...dang it ^^)