Not bad for a crackfic.

This would be a fun full story

I rather enjoyed it. Thank you

seriously write a preview for this please its a good start for a multi chapter sotry.

This is good.

Nice. Interesting idea and original execution of it. The characterization was nigh perfect, and the fact that they were eating oreos together really made me giggle (which, seeing as I have a japanese final in less than ten hours, is definitely not an easy feat).

This is most certainly not a crackfic. A crackfic is one with no underlying purpose or meaning and very little cohesion. Your story makes an interesting point about the similarities of two characters and is easy to read. It makes sense.

good story, even though I haven't watched digimon since season two, I was able to follow this story just fine... keep up the good work!

I was just wandering back through fics that I love, when I realized that this totally didn't have any real reviews. There's not much to critique here - you're an awesome writer, really - but I love this one-shot to death.

Justice League and Digimon Frontier? With an actual characterization of Kouichi where he's not just a whiny kid who's getting inbetween Kouji and Takuya? One that touches on the trauma he went through? Wow. Just wow.

Admittedly, every time I reread this, I have a strong desire to write a crossover between Batman Beyond and Frontier (mainly because I think there needs to be more Matt McGinnis)... You're giving me bunnies with this thing, which is a true sign of a well-written piece of fanfiction. Anyway, just thought I'd make sure you realized exactly how awesome this is.

Sorry, I don't watch Digimon, but your fic is pretty good. You should write more.