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Victoria
2008-07-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love it! I've been looking for a good Jay/Manny Emma/Sean fic. this is the only one I have found, but I love it. I thought it was so funny & cute. keep up the good work!
Underneath All Elsewhere
2008-03-16
ch 1,
abuseAw, that was so adorable! I loved this fic! Not only the Jay/Manny, but the Sean/Emma was great, too. I think you were spot on with their characterizations; this is just how they would act if they were getting married in Vegas.

They were all their usual selves and I could picture them saying things like what they said. Emma keeping the order, Manny all nervous, Sean trying to keep the peace and Jay acting pretty nonchalant but secretly wanting his girl to be happy.

I liked the ending the best, and it was funny how Manny realized that she'd actually just gotten married. I think it would be cool to see the Sean/Emma and Jay/Manny relationships with a single storyline since both the females and males involved are best friends. It was also excellent how you used descriptive words and captured the emotions.

Stupendous job!
Thekle
2007-12-31
ch 1,
abusefunny and cute...and totally the only way jay would ever get married.
brankel1
2007-07-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseLove it.Post soon.
WeasleyWives
2007-05-28
ch 1,
abuseAW! That was totally adorable. I never pictured Manny and Jay together. Wonderful job. You should continue!
MaryAuksi
2007-05-26
ch 1,
abuseThis was kinda random (GREAT random, though) but still really cute. I've never read a Jay/Manny story before. THis story was great with all the mocking, teasing and cuteness (not much of the last one, but still a little bit).
2whak4wrds
2007-05-25
ch 1,
abuseAw, that was a bit random, but a good random. It was really cute, and JayManny is unconventional and all, but it was done really well, and Jay was so in-character at all times. Some writers have a hard time with that, but this was very good. And there was SeanEmma, so that was an absolute plus. LOVED IT!
This Is The Story Of A Girl
2007-05-25
ch 1,
abuseHaha... this was awesome. At first I was thinking; Jay and Manny? HUH? But it was pretty cool. Great job!
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