This is good however not a story its a paragraph. I think if ya just look at Zoey ya can tell.

Higher rating because of homosexuality? No way.

However,it does have referneces to sex.

xD Sweet.

Everyone knew this even before Zoey appeared. Appealshipping had a giant fanbase when Zoey was still on in the opening.

pretty good. short. Maybe next time make it longer?

How is this K and not teen? With "her...girlfriend," and the direct mention of lesbian sex and "I'M GAY!" in it, this is NOT something a 10-year-old should read.

funny story though. :-)

xD

I love it! Especially the part about Cheryl and Gardenia at the end! Keep up the great work!

Appealshipping FTW!

yah make another one please!

This is me returning the favor when you reviewed my fic. Again, thank you for that.

Nice short and sweet fic here.

You were able to keep Hikari in character by not having her being worried about the fact that her relationship is now public knowledge. It was also nice to see that that attitude has seemingly rubbed off on Nozomi at the end of the story. Maybe that's what a kiss from your lover will do to you.

Good job.