Hey! I don't think Squall and Laguna should be together, since they're family. BUT. I LOVE Yaoi fanfiction, dunno why... And I love to read Squall/Laguna yaoi as well, and this is a great piece of work. My favourite in this fic is the ending. "The teasing smile faded, leaving only the one that glimmered, deep and happy, in his eyes. "Love you," he echoed softly and when our lips touched I swear I could taste the words, there on his tongue, like the sweetest thing I had ever known."
I love it! Great!

Oh please continue this story line. It's so cute. The grammar is good. No errors. Good job Please update SOON!

:D stunning work! hahaha, father's day, of course! great capture of the characters...

*squee* Laguna/Squall! ^_^ I love this pairing, lol. Great fic, you combined cute and kinky in a way that should really be impossible; well done! *more squeeing over pairing*

*laughs* I like your twisted bent! Daddy indeed! *laughs again* Very nice emotional scenes though. It's nice you take their biological relationship into consideration rather than making it a side fact for a chance to get two cuties boinking. I'm not one for putting much emphasis on the coincidental biological relation to any particular person, but it is something normal folk would occasionally dwell upon. Silly normal folk. *pelts them with rubber wrenches*

Makes me giggle. I liked it. I could have done with moe intimacy, but still really good. Liked it.

Yet another great LagunaxSquall fic. ^^ Squall calling Laguna "Daddy" is classic. *grins*

aw! I so loved that! It was the best...although the idea is a little, as Laguna would say, "Kinky." it was great all the same!!

This is.. oooh. *Very* nice. I.. ooooh. :)

That was really sweet! I really enjoyed the wonderful ending. Although I think I might have liked this better if it wasnt incest, but it was good anyhow. my rating: 8/10

this is good. sweet and sad and...good. keep up the great job. :) (psst, when are you going to write a seifer/squall fic? *coughs*hinthint) it took laguna a while to say "son," though - one would think he'd say "son" right off, hm? this is very good. ^_^

I loved it! I'm not really into incest, but this was SO beautifully written. Thoughtful, detailed, just beautiful! ::runs off to read more::

I never know how to reveiw your Squall/Laguna stuff so I don't normally. I like this - it's well written (as pretty much all your stuff is) and somehow puts a rather controversail topic in a none controversal way.
Is it really incest if it's between two men though? The main reason close relatives can't marry is because of the web-toed children. Squall and Laguna can't have kids together anyway so should it be really that controversial?

Anyway - like the story, like your writing.

Oooh... kinky. But then, I've always enjoyed Squall/Laguna romance. And finding good S/L yaoi is practically impossible. You do it very well.

I know you wanted flames, but well, let me be the first to say that this is quite possibly the sweetest thing I've ever read. Your stories pretty much introduced me to the whole LagunaxSquall dynamic, and though I thought it'd be squicky, it wasn't and all because you treated it as two people who just might be perfect for each other who just happen to share half their DNA. Thanks!