Great fic...a part of mi wants its turned into a sequel but the greater part of mi likes how it ended. I think the writers kinda screwed up when they paired Will with Matt not that i have anything against Matt, i just think she could have been paired with some1 better like say Phobos or Caleb; i have the same opinion of Avatar-TLA, with the whole Katara Aang thing which is so wrong in my books, Aang's okay but he's nothing compared to Zuko! hehehe, and even with Harry Potter, Ron's great but Hermione would look cuter with Draco. So neway great fic, gradual and convincing

Awesome story I really enjoyed reading it though I do prefer romance (hint hint). I hope there a sequal off to check right now. So going in my favs!

I love your story. Seriously. It might be your voice, your perfect blend of imagery and abstract or something, but something about your storytelling is simply awe inspiring. It draws the reader in, and I thank you for that.

You have a few grammatical errors and some typos here and there. They're all little mistakes and easily fixable, however, they do detract from the cohesiveness of the piece. You also have a few comma splices, so it's hard to keep up with meaning of the sentence. But like said, they're easily fixable. And they don't change the fact that *that something* is still there.

I love your characterization in this piece. You capture Phobos's and Will's spirits very effectively through their actions and your descriptions. (Well, I think you captured their characters. Of course, I've only seen the animation and haven't read the comics, so I'm kinda a noob when it comes to the W.I.T.C.H. fandom...)

I would like to request a sequel to this piece. While I do think it works as a stand-alone, your characterization and genius plot structure is so wonderfully built that it would be a shame for this to remain uncontinued. Seriously. Please? Pretty please? (sad pleading eyes)

~Komo-chan

wonderful story, very well written.

hey do you have any more will phobos stories by any chance

*Grins* I really like this fic! ^_^ I can't wait to read more like it! ^_^

This is a great read. Definately going on my favourites!

Really great story. Yay P/W. The emotions and dialog were really convincing. Great job. =)

FANTASTIC!
great,great ,great story!
But i'd prefere a willx phobos romance!:P
by the way,plz,do a sequel!^^

You should do a sequel to this, its very good. You kept both Will and Phobos in charector very well.

Great one shot. Hope you find time for the sequal.

hey not bad although you need to proof read better
it was a little more "open" then i expected i thought you'd go more subtle but still a pretty good fic thanks alot

dragons WILL rule the world

please,write more this was very good!