This is a brilliant story- well written and great plot. All the same, I hate to be reminded of their fate. This is great!

totally wasnt expecting that!! its a really good story but im not sure that it goes along with the "rules" of the Dutchman, well either way i liked it...anything that gets them together in the end is a winner as far as im concered. little Will/Jack was really cute and i like how he got to wear Jacks hat, so cute! and i LOVED the enuch line! hahaha

I dont really know where the story could go from here but id love to read more of this story

Beautiful! Please write more!

I really liked how you created a vivid story in just one chapter. It was very interesting and I'm glad Will and Elizabeth are together again! Once again, very good, I'm impressed.

Great fic more if you can please

I have to say that, even though I am not a Willabeth shipper, I REALLY liked that story. I was crying at the end. I really liked how you ended it.

that is exactly what i think they should of done


IDIOTS ! listen to the wisemans words or DIE!

This was a wonderful story. It was emotional, caring and well laid out. My only complaint was regarding who was speaking at any given time.

Example:
“Yes Jack?” The pirate shook his head and reached to take her hand.

This is Elizabeth responding to Jack, but it is not clear on first glance.

If instead you said:
"Yes Jack?"

The pirate shook his head and reached to take her hand.

The simple spacing change makes it clear who is speaking and, in this case since Elizabeth is also a pirate, who is acting. The same occurs here:


“William hasn't forgotten you lovely. I promise.”

Fresh tears rose in her eyes and she moved to the railing.

All the pieces are there as evidenced by the number of reviews you have received. The story is good, making dialog easier to follow can only strengthen it. I look forward to reading more of your work.

That was amazing... absolutely loved it!!

YAY!

Aw, I loved this! Little Jack was so cute, and that was the perfect way to end it! Brilliant!

MORE! please!! add more even though this is a one-shot add more please!-starts crying-!

Amazing story, the ending was so creative and good, it makes me feel so much better about the ending in awe. Thank you so much for writing this.

thank you.

It is not often that a story touches my heart and pulls on the strings like yours did. Not only was it a joy to read but it was so very perfect... sorry there is not much I can say other than I loved it and that well, I loved it!

Yes. Thank you. I needed this.

...what was that you said about us wanting to see more? I wouldn't ask it of you if you didn't offer, but if you do have any further good ideas, a continuation could be very interesting.
^_^