Ugh! damn, my nose REALLY started bleeding! my cousin told me about reading ff smut! lol!...i don't thnk my nose is gonna stop bleeding anytime soon though!

great job!

~CES~

Dare I say nosebleedingly sexy?

woah! nice job, i loved it! >3

EK! My nose! I may die from a nosebleed... damned amnemic tendencies...

Absolutely...L-O-V-E-L-Y. I'm a total NaruSasu die hard fan. And you're the best writer out there. (I also praise you on your Inu/San stories ^^) PLEASE update your stories soon! I really want to read another!

~Rika

That was ridiculously hot grudge-sex. Do that again!

This was really good, nice work i liked it a lot!:)

Hmm never really saw Naruto as a Seme, but this worked out very well.
It was very well written I must say.
Bravo

Wow! Excelent!
Since I had liked to be in this forest! XD
Kisses from Argentina!

lol, I love most of your work, but this one is probably the most humerous

hehe, smuttyness, yay!
did they do it in the park? where the kids were?

Wow. I would have expected Sasuke to have his ** to Suna when he called him a **. Oh well, he was half delerious.
Great,funny story.

OMG Naruto's the seme! -squeal- I LUV it when he's seme!! ^_^

I LOVE THAT STORY SO MUCH! XD

...O_o.

Oh..my. That was certainly unexpected. BUT NICE ANYWAY - Naruto was a top in this one. Definitely different, my jaw was on the floor the whole time I read. Teehee.