good but gibbs was stuck with jack at the end of worlds end
so he cannot be barbossa's first mate

Yea ur writing a great story. With the help of an editor (no offense) you could be a great author.
Why did you stop the story on Chapter 7 though? I was looking forward for more.

I love this story. I can't really wait for the next chapter. I know you've been writting it a long time ago but please go on. I enter this website every week nearly just to check this story and if it's done or not. Please go on. I'm sorry i am putting you under pressure and rushing you but I really do love the story and i really, really hope you finish it soon.

It's me again,

How is Gibbs on the Pearl if he got left behind with Jack at the end of the Pirates 3.

Thanx for writing me back, i really appreciate it and i really want to thank you about the explination you gave me. i know you didn't want to spoil the story but i really needed to know what will happen. i couldn't wait till you start writing it again. and i wanted to tell you that i read nearly all your POTC stories and they're one of the best i've ever read. you should start thinking about making you own book or become a writer. you'll be really succesful. Anyways i hope you finish up your stories quickly because i can't wait to read them.

This is the best story that could actullay be done for the new POTC movies. It is one of the top five for me and i love the way the action and the romance come together in a weird and beautiful way. I would love to see it made as a movie but i think you should end it by making Elizabeth get back to Will again because after the credits of the third movie Elizabeth was waiting for Will to come with her son from Will after ten years. So i think you should start making the romance between Jack and Elizabeth come to an end. But i love the story and i would love it more and more if it could be made as a movie. It's a really great story and i can't even say enough words to describe how great and wonderful it is!

Hi Im a student and I just read this thing today... its awfully good... I just wonder... why did you stop writing?? Everyone;s encouraging you to write more!! Please write more, and me and my fellow students will greatly appreciate it.

Thanks!!

great chapter update soon!1

update soon

This story is really really good, and um, im going to need you to update ASAP!! hehehe just kidding!! I'm in love with this story, please keep writing!!

Of all the Pirates of the Caribbean fanfics I've read, this is my favourite! It's really well written and I love all the banter between Jack and Elizabeth...Sparrabeth at its finest!

Hahaha! The last part was the icing on the perfect chapter!

my favorite part:
"Hector. I bet he found a really long telescope by now..."
hilarious! great chapter as always, i can't wait for more!

awesome! i've always wanted an idea of what's going to happen the second after the movie was over haha... and hey how did Gibbs get back on the Pearl? i though he was back with Giselle and the other girl talking bout Turtles... :P i might get answered in the future i barely started reading as you can see so yeah, so far it's a really good story! :D

hey!! wow this is so good!!