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Bubbley-chan
2009-09-05 . chapter 4
you forget to do that a lot
RunLyllithRun
2008-04-06 . chapter 1
COOL!
Physicbybirth
2007-08-31 . chapter 7
That was AWSOME!

Hey, I like exlamation points to!

Oh you forgot the disclaimer on chapter seven!
Cute in Purple
2007-07-16 . chapter 7
It's cute and I like it!
pottersparky
2007-06-21 . chapter 7
Well done! I like chapthers 6 and 7. It was so nice to see paulina get what was coming to her. Maybe next she learn not to mess with D/S. I look forward to your future stories. Keep up the good work.
crocgirl2815
2007-06-18 . chapter 7
Nice. I loved this chapter. I really liked how you had Tucker & Sam save Danny at the last possible second. Now, if only this could be turned into an actual episode.
ParanormalPrincess
2007-06-17 . chapter 7
XD That chapter rocked! I don't know what was more awesome- Tucker's 'Okay, I’m all in favor of you guys being together and all, but do you have to be so mushy while I’m standing right here?'- or Paulina getting drenched in water balloons! Way to go! ;)
kpfan72491
2007-06-17 . chapter 7
aww, very cute great job.
Manyara
2007-06-17 . chapter 7
Nice job with the ending!
Manyara
2007-06-13 . chapter 6
Well I'm going to review anyway, so great job!
kpfan72491
2007-06-12 . chapter 6
update soon. Ican't wait till the next chapter
ParanormalPrincess
2007-06-12 . chapter 6
I'm reviewing anyway! I sure hope you can someday read this...

IT WAS SO AWESOME! OMG, you're doing an outstanding job with the use of imagery! I really loved the 'Her heart pounded louder and faster as the sound grew louder with each passing step. She was so close now that she swore her heart would leap out any minute now.'

Way to go! ;) This is getting even better! I'm so sorry about the storm! :( There's a storm where I am, too.
crocgirl2815
2007-06-12 . chapter 6
That's alright. As long as you get the next the chapter up by next year. Haha. The same thing happened to me once. Except, at that time I wasn't doing fanfiction. Since the only computer that we had at the time was broken...well, let's just say that I had a fun time explaining that to my teachers. Luckily for me, they believed me & gave me time to redo the work that I had on that comouter. Anyway, I just wanted you to know that I could relate to you. So as much as I'd like this updated asap, it's fine. Keep up the good work.

crocgirl2815
Manyara
2007-06-08 . chapter 5
OMG! I like 'em too.
pottersparky
2007-06-08 . chapter 5
Poor danny. These ghosts always messing up his plans. It is sweet that sam is worry about danny. Maybe if she need to fine him than she could use that boomring that always seems to fine danny one way or a another. I see tucker and jazz trying to help. I love the flashback that was done. Please keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more.
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