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| MI 2008-09-04 ch 9, anon. | abuseIloveyourstory. SorryIhavenospacebar. |
| MorganEddasil 2008-09-02 ch 14,  | abusehi hun! great story! you have some minor grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors (ie - you were talking about stories and write 'tails', when what you wanted was 'tales') if you wanted i wouldn't mind checking for those next time you have written work. the present tense was a ** to get used to (i write in past) but it's an awesome story nonetheless. keep writing! |
| wiccan-jessica 2008-08-24 ch 14, | abusegreat work!... keep on writing! |
| dsilvis22 2008-08-23 ch 14, | abusei love it more plz! |
| VioletTragedies 2008-08-20 ch 14, | abuseWow, your story is very funny and fun to read. I'm looking forward to updates and looking forward to who Harry's other mate, who i think is either Charlie, or Hermione. |
| cephygnus 2008-08-20 ch 14, | abuseWow. I don't think I've ever read any alternate dimension stories as different from cannon as this one. I'm looking forward to updates! |
| PirateCaptainBo 2008-08-20 ch 14, | abuseBo: Oh so curious as to Harry's other mate. XD Is he/she bonded with both Harry and David or just Harry? Gah, Bo doubts it's one of the Weasely's. Though now that she thinks about it Charlie could be one since he works with Magical Creatures, aka Dragons. xP But besides that she is truly not sure. Ski: I'm going to guess Viktor Krum. xD No reason why, he's just not used enough in my opinion. xDD Update again soon please! |
| The Night Air 2008-08-19 ch 14, | abuse^^ Wee. |
| NeverEnchained 2008-08-19 ch 14, | abuseI like it :] |
| Saemir 2008-08-19 ch 14, | abuseDarknessmolded, I was wondering - are you still looking for a beta? I have a lot of experience as a beta (nearly six years), as well experience with proofreading in general. This is a fantastic story, one I'd really -love- to work on, if possible. Anyway, if you are interested, or if you'd like to see some of my work before making a decision, please feel free to email me at: . ^_^ In either case - well done for writing such a unique story, with such an interesting plot and characterization. I definitely look forward to reading more in the future. ~ Saemir |
| id 2008-08-18 ch 14, anon. | abuseHis wand doesn't work properly! =( that just sucks, wonder what's wrong with it. |
| Mysticalflame 2008-08-17 ch 13, | abuseWhat happened to Ter'in and Mizu? |
| Cheezewizz 2008-08-16 ch 14, | abuseI like that this is so original. I would prefer if Old Harry was there more often than young. Also, I know a lot of 11 year olds and they do not allow themselves to be picked up or hugged so much. My biggest wish for this fic is for Harry to be older so that he and David can have a deeper relationship. I like his character and I like super harry. Keep writing. cheers. |
| Mysticalflame 2008-08-16 ch 14, | abuseHm. It's cute! I actually went back through the other chapter to see hints for Harry's other mate, but the only other name that was mentioned was Lucius. So if it's not him, I don't really know who it would be. :P |
| A 2008-08-16 ch 10, anon. | abusegreatly sauté after sought |