Good laughs, great drama and great plot!

Great story! I loved it a lot! Can't wait for more stories! Keep them coming along!

reread? not neccessary!as if anyone could forget such a good story! I really liked it! especially the ending with the Mok! I like how you insert pervious stories into the newer ones!
I hope you write another Mitchell fic!
see ya next story!
~ Aligewe

Great so far! ive read the entire series and it rocks. im kinda a lurker. I hope there is still more to this fic.

Very nice. ^_^ (I should tell you, though, that this looks remarkably similar to the most recently posted chapter of The Boomerang Principle.)

I just wanted to tell you I have read all of your stories and I love them. You are one of my favorite SG Fan Fic writers. I am a terrible lerker or I would have posted this a long time ago. Please keep writing. I truely enjoy the "Camper" characters that you have developed. I love how you write Jack/Sam stories and the Malony stories.

I check the site about every 2-3 weeks to see if there is anything new.

Danita

You made me sad again! That's a long time that Melony has been carrying around the guilt over Brad's death. Having Sheppard share his own experience (which is also really sad), hopefully has helped her with that. And he gave great advice - "There's nothing wrong with being happy, Melony." (And I'm glad to see that being drunk didn't lead them in a direction that I was thinking you were going...you know, reliving a certain dream.) :)

Interesting story... a few questions, though: where's Ford through all of this, and does Shepard get a girlfriend (other than Aron)? It would be interesting to see him in love.

Wow, this is the first of your stories I've read--you've created quite an AU!! I like your characters, and the premise of the story, and your writing is first-rate. Welcome to my bookmarks! ^^

I hate when these 'higher beings' talk in circles. Just spit it out.

Excellent chapter! I wonder if Johvon has any other hidden talents?

cant wait to find out more about this guy lol :)

nice story so far!!

Ah, no good deed every goes unpunished. See what happens when you meddle with people's minds.

that is a good question who is the guy lol :)