damn that is so sad!
you so need to update as soon as u can

And continuing from the last chapter about the children, since I failed to look closely at the ages, it's impossible to have so many children so close together. Well, certainly possible, I guess, but not probable. If Tenten was nursing, then that would mean no new pregnancy. When a woman nurses, it acts as a sort of birth control. Sort of a signal to the body that she has a young child and therefore should not get pregnant again. Ain't nature wonderful?

Also, this is so scattered that I'm incredibly confused at what's going on.

The writing in this is . . . lacking. It's random and has no real substance to it. It's just "oh look over here wait now here."

Seventeen.

. . .

Seventeen.

Why would anyone do that?

"Abuni Hyuga (13 years old)

Usagi Hyuga (13 year olds, was supposed to be Abuni’s twin sister, but detached herself away from her before birth and came 3 weeks after Abuni was born so they were no longer twins but single born children)"

Just because they were born so far apart doesn't make them not twins. If they were in the uterus at the same time, then they're twins. Also, it's unlikely that they would have detached from each other. Identical twins share the same amniotic sac and therefore must be born at the same time. Either way, it's unlikely that someone would go into labor and have a child, only to have the other not come out. An emergency C-section would probably be performed because prolonged labor can be harmful to the mother and child.

Either way, wow at the multiple births. Triples can be conceived naturally, but quadruplets often occur after the taking fertility drugs. And that many births could definitely be dangerous for the mother. How has her uterus not come out yet? It's baffling.

Fifteen.

. . .

FIFTEEN.

While quite possible, I doubt it's probable that anyone would want to have FIFTEEN kids. Especially since it would mean Tenten would have to quit her ninja life, and I don't see her doing that. Or having fifteen kids, but I addressed that already.

Whoa...15 children...xD
They must have been busy;]

Make some more please and wow! Tenten and Neji sure had alot of children! I mean 15 of them! How could they eversurvive! I could not even last with a little cousin that I could babysit! They sure must be proffesionals!

15 KIDS! wow
can't wait till next chapter