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| XxIcexX 2008-08-16 ch 1,  | abuseWoaw. That was incredible! The dialogue, the conversation, the characters! You blew me away! I don't think I've read a fic with Jack more in-character! It was phenomanal! You're amazing. ;D Liz |
| Rosa Cotton 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseWhat a delightful fic starring our favorite pirate and his pirate lady! You had them perfectly in character. Their interaction was brilliant. And Norrington...loved his supporting role. Your descriptions and dialogue were very good. I particularly liked these parts: “Jack would have me seduce you to obtain the keys,” she muttered. James flushed, then looked at her with interest. “I see. Would you have really?” “I don’t think this is quite the time or place to be asking such—” “COMMODORE!” Jack cried loudly again, his tone now only feigning merriment. “The usual sorts of pleasantries. Stealing, for example.” She was taken aback. “What would you have stolen? There was hardly anything of any value in—” She was abruptly cut short as he leaned toward her and pressed his lips against hers, committing the act of thievery in question. It lasted for only a moment, the kiss he stole. But it was long enough, apparently, for when Jack broke away, he was grinning mischievously as if he knew something that she did not. This left me with a smile on my face. *claps* Wonderful job done! |
| Arraya 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseoh that was so nice... |
| Sean 2007-07-19 ch 1, anon. | abuse"I never heard of you, either!" I was laughing my ** OFF! You're a freakin' genius! It was funny, sweet and heartwarming for JE-shippers everywhere! Keep doing what you're doing! |
| teepirategirl 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseOH.MY.GOD! You're so GOOD! You captured Jack and Elizabeth's personality and relationship PERFECTLY. The teasing and yet the little bit of depth in their interaction was perfect and the "I never" game was VERY interesting to read. I love the way Jack 'persuaded' the gaurd in getting all the things he wanted. Jack's dialouge was just so HIM. |
| Jenny-Beth 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseAh, Sparrabeth. I do love this pairing. I am sure that by now you have noticed that I am simply going through the list of stories you have written. I think your up for being added to my Favourite Author list, actually. You write very well and this one is no exception. Good job. -Jenn |
| primadonna001 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abusewell done - you really captured the characters |
| AdhesivePrincess 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! You captured Jack perfectly! |
| saucekay5 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this (drinking-game-without-drinks was hilarious.) Your writing style is very interesting too, in a good way 'course. |
| howlongmustiwait 2007-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou made me smile. THANK YOU! |
| tanith75 2007-05-28 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! The banter was absolutely perfect :) |
| Sir Francis Drake's Heir 2007-05-28 ch 1, | abuseAw, that ws splendid! You have the banter down pat. However, it began rather slowly, and I found myself skipping lines. |
| Erinya 2007-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThis story is love. I adore their circuitous conversations. And the way they both cheat at I've Never. |
| S.B. Kisses 2007-05-26 ch 1, | abuseVery good! I loved the interaction between Elizabeth and Jack! Very well written! |
| Stella 2007-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuse*Crying* Thats it? I want more... It was funny, and sweet, and... *Breaks down in tears* You're a genius, love! Stella |