 Lunarfox's Silverdusk 2009-09-10 . chapter 30Will they find out about his identity soon? I can't wait! |
 Stygian Styx 2009-04-27 . chapter 30great chapter! |
 Sunao Kinokiita-tenshi 2009-04-15 . chapter 30wow. this is great writing! i love your version of naruto. will he ever tell sakura who he really is? i mean she gets all depressed and all when she thinks about him, so she'll figure it out some how right? and when will jiraiya come back into the story? wait, he will come back right!? the pervy sage's gotta come home! btw how did he react to naruto's death? please tell me and write more! |
 Hiroshima Namikaze 2009-04-15 . chapter 30rofl too bad nuffin happend to team 7 |
 Vagabond1215 2009-04-13 . chapter 5It's a good story so far as i've read, similar to one of my own, sadly i haven't posted any of mine on here yet, but i have a simple question, im slightly confused as you make a mention of Naruto both excelling in everything in the academy, doing it perfectly, and then at the end, mentioning how he's last in the class because he puts forth no effort. They just seem to conflict where as unless you put forth no effort yet still do it perfectly, but he'd then be top in the class. I know it's easy to meld ideas accidentally, ive caught myself on it many times before, an easy, recommended fix for this would be, in order to stick with the overall plot of his academy time, change or remove the statements on him performing perfectly. |
 The Three Stoogies 2009-04-13 . chapter 30Welcom back a good chapter update soon. |
 DarkRavie 2009-04-13 . chapter 30Good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic. |
 somebody51232 2009-01-03 . chapter 29this is actualy a realy good story keep up the good work and update soon |
 Stygian Styx 2008-08-17 . chapter 29good, but I had no idea who red or fox was until about 2/3 through. |
 Hiroshima Namikaze 2008-05-26 . chapter 29i know how ya feel man |
 muffnbootz 2008-04-08 . chapter 29OI! ^-^/ Srry that i have been gone so long >_< Life is the evilest thing since sliced bread! ^^ well you have been quite busy! I cant wait to go back and read your others stories as well! But this one still Rock-Meh-Sockz!
So yea gomen about meh long absence, i cant wait for the next chapter! \^-^/ |
 Ero-kun 2008-03-30 . chapter 29Good chapter ;) Lookin' forward to next. |
 The Three Stoogies 2008-03-30 . chapter 29A good chapter as usual update soon. |
 DarkRavie 2008-03-29 . chapter 29Great chapter. I look forward to reading what happens in the next one. |
 Hiroshima Namikaze 2008-03-01 . chapter 28nice xD so sakura figured out red's identity? |