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Lunarfox's Silverdusk
2009-09-10 . chapter 30
Will they find out about his identity soon? I can't wait!
Stygian Styx
2009-04-27 . chapter 30
great chapter!
Sunao Kinokiita-tenshi
2009-04-15 . chapter 30
wow. this is great writing! i love your version of naruto. will he ever tell sakura who he really is? i mean she gets all depressed and all when she thinks about him, so she'll figure it out some how right? and when will jiraiya come back into the story? wait, he will come back right!? the pervy sage's gotta come home! btw how did he react to naruto's death? please tell me and write more!
Hiroshima Namikaze
2009-04-15 . chapter 30
rofl too bad nuffin happend to team 7
Vagabond1215
2009-04-13 . chapter 5
It's a good story so far as i've read, similar to one of my own, sadly i haven't posted any of mine on here yet, but i have a simple question, im slightly confused as you make a mention of Naruto both excelling in everything in the academy, doing it perfectly, and then at the end, mentioning how he's last in the class because he puts forth no effort. They just seem to conflict where as unless you put forth no effort yet still do it perfectly, but he'd then be top in the class. I know it's easy to meld ideas accidentally, ive caught myself on it many times before, an easy, recommended fix for this would be, in order to stick with the overall plot of his academy time, change or remove the statements on him performing perfectly.
The Three Stoogies
2009-04-13 . chapter 30
Welcom back a good chapter update soon.
DarkRavie
2009-04-13 . chapter 30
Good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.
somebody51232
2009-01-03 . chapter 29
this is actualy a realy good story keep up the good work and update soon
Stygian Styx
2008-08-17 . chapter 29
good, but I had no idea who red or fox was until about 2/3 through.
Hiroshima Namikaze
2008-05-26 . chapter 29
i know how ya feel man
muffnbootz
2008-04-08 . chapter 29
OI! ^-^/ Srry that i have been gone so long >_< Life is the evilest thing since sliced bread! ^^ well you have been quite busy! I cant wait to go back and read your others stories as well! But this one still Rock-Meh-Sockz!

So yea gomen about meh long absence, i cant wait for the next chapter! \^-^/
Ero-kun
2008-03-30 . chapter 29
Good chapter ;) Lookin' forward to next.
The Three Stoogies
2008-03-30 . chapter 29
A good chapter as usual update soon.
DarkRavie
2008-03-29 . chapter 29
Great chapter. I look forward to reading what happens in the next one.
Hiroshima Namikaze
2008-03-01 . chapter 28
nice xD so sakura figured out red's identity?
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