That's too much revelations for a fist chapter don't you think so?

Good chapter, that Keiji guy's move reminded me of Yamcha's Wolf Fang Fist off of DBZ. Will Zaku and his team be held back like Lee's team was? Gai held them back their first year as genins and didn't allow them to compete in the exam. Will Kana do the same thing?

Woot, Yamcha. lol Too bad you couldn't give him his littler shape shifting friend. Oh well, awesome though. Really kool.

Just to let you knoe though, since there are usually a Konoha 9. There should be another team besides Team Gai. I don't know why but in most of the Anime and fanficitions there were always three teams that pass. While the others either become samurai or just normal civilians.

Not saying you should, but just giving you the idea. This story has a crap load of growing to do. lol Can't wait to see it all grown up.

Pretty good, maybe the next chapter we can learn a bit about zaku's teammates. Hide seems like Hinata except she has confidence and speaks her mind if she has to. Kana appears to be an all business sensei and the exact opposite of Kakashi or Gai. And Keiji all we know is that he grew tired of following his brother and decided to change his ways and he appears to be a powerful ally. Perhaps on their first mission we'll learn more about them and their abilites. Hope you update soon.

This Hide girl seems like she's hiding (no pun intended) something. She's a medic nin right? A rival for Sakura in that area eh? I wonder what this other guy and their sensei is like. Update soon

Ah, I see. I know those characters that well. But I do see the resemblance kind of. I was thinking that she could be like Nico Robin off One Piece. It's good though, I like them. I just can't wait to see the next guy.

Well that's interesting. I can't even guess who those two are like. The girl is what caught me off guard. I am going to guess that the Bandit guy is like Yamcha or Tien. Maybe even like Conan. lol I just know it's one of the guys.

I kinda expected Zaku to be paired with TenTen and Lee, oh well. I wonder what this Gin girl and his other teammate are like. This was a good chapter

Don't tell me he has those gay airholes, cause it doesn't make sense because Orochimaru implanted them.

Don't be to discouraged by how unpopular this fanfic is. It's understandable that people would barely care about Zaku. So far, I really can't wait for you to continue this one. If possible, maybe you can be the reason Zaku gets popular.

I also noticed that you like some DBZ characters. I honestly hope you don't put him in Team Gai because Team Gai can't be changed, in my opinion anyways. I was thinking though, you should base it off two of your favorite characters. It doesn't have to be them but they can act like them. I saw you should have Yamcha and Samurai Jack or something like that. Those two would be interesting team mates. Same goes for the leader. I'm just throwing out some ideas, it's your choice on what to do. Anyways, I'll be waiting for progress and reading as well.

not bad, but it was kinda filler. Not much happened except for a bit of training and Lee being introduced. Hope you update soon

Nice chapter ^^. I wonder if Lee is still going to be trained by Gai though. Anyway, keep up the good work ^^. I'll be looking forward to another update from you ^^.

A couple grammar errors but other than that this was a good chapter, update soon please

Hm, gai knew zaku's parents right? Maybe you could put a flashback involving Gai and Zaku's mom and dad?

It's neat that Zaku is giving another chance at a happy life, his past must have been terrible for him to join orochimaru who used him as a pawn