I wished you had continued this story but I loved this Daniel.

All in all a great story so far and I don't say that about many fanfics I review because I rarely find one as well written and easy to read as this. Would love to see it finished one day.

Also to answer another Reviewers question about the fish in Jack's pond. Please refer to season 8's 2 part finale Moebius.
If you recall there were no fish in Jack's pond (S8 "Threads")
A fish jumps out of the water in a scene almost exactly the same as the ending in Threads, apart from said fish (S8 "Moebius Pt2")

I have been reading this entire story, loved it, and discovered today that it was abandoned here. Really? What happened? This was excellent, I was so moved by this world you had created. Please at least bring them home.

Umm...it was great in the begging but now ur just repeating the real episodes can u go back to ur version please I likes that one better. Please keep writing!

Goddamn it, update! This story is great!

Up until this chapter I enjoyed this story; I have only one problem with it: there were fish in Jack's pond. He always talks about how it is relaxing and that their are no fish in his pond. Other than that one detail, I really enjpy the story and I will keep reading.

Hi, well written. When are you gonna finish it as I would love to see what is going to happen?

good story please let me know if and when you finish it thanks

This story is amazing, I wish you would post even 1 more chapter. Please?

Very good!

Excellent story. Characters are so accurate and their speech so real I can just hear them talking. Very well written. I hope you intend to finish it.

UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!

Hi-

Do you plan to work on this story any more? I've read most of it, but would love to have an ending!

Thanks.

CindyLou

I am in love with this story! The plotline is terrfic. I never thought of what could have happened if Vala had come back before season 9. I like how the plot is basically the same as the show once you get into season 9, but has fun little differences. I hope you can eventually come back to the story and add another chapter or an ending!

Ok, so I just stumbled across this story, and I really, REALLY hope that you update it eventually. This is one of the best Daniel/Vala stories I've read, and I'd be very grateful for more. Oh, but please, no marriage to Tomin - that would just be too weird.