|Reviews for Being Found|
| QuasiOuster 6/13/08 . chapter 19
Jackson's Law just about sums it up. I particularly enjoyed the pseudo bickering with Vala's request for a goodbye kiss and also the debate over transporter versus communications device. It's very cute. What an interesting twist to have them able to see each other's true form while in the other bodies. That makes things a little more intense between the two, especially for what's coming up. I predict things are about to get hot for them, and not in a good way!
| spacegypsy1 6/13/08 . chapter 19
Oh, ye ha! More. This is such fun. Loved it. Read it this morning with my coffee. Such a treat to wake up do. B
| starjems88 6/13/08 . chapter 19
can't wait for tuesday!
| HAZMOT 6/13/08 . chapter 19
With Vala and Daniel in this village barely able to pull of that they are the inhabitants, it's no wonder both of them were concentrating on leaving their bodies before the Prior shook their hands and found out the truth. I like the fact too that Carolyn is concerned about Vala and how she does seem to always end up in the infirmary, and not by her fault. Now we already know what will happen if Vala and Daniel cannot convince the Administrator who they are. :D
| dawn 6/10/08 . chapter 18
Yeah! so happy to see you and this story again, i would wait a year between chapters just as long as you kept writing. very nice chapter, so well written and still has a nice flow after all this time. looking forward to seeing how this episode plays out in your timeline. good luck with your writing goal, and i'll be here when you're ready to post.
| HAZMOT 6/10/08 . chapter 18
Ah, the braclets. How fond I am of those mystifying links. Well while Sam figuires out the connection, it seems that Daniel and Vala are comfortable being together and not so far apart. It was reassuring to see Jack make fun of both our two budding boyfriend and girlfriend. Well now this new technology of transporting them to a unknow planet is sure to make things more interesting. :D
| hermit hideaway 6/10/08 . chapter 18
Great chapter. I love reading this story as I get to see into Vala's head and why she is the way she is. Plus her and Daniel together are perfect. Anyway, update again soon so I can find out what happens with the Ori.
| lucyjane345 6/10/08 . chapter 18
Yipee new chapter, I am so glad you've updated this story, it puts a nice new spin on canon (this would have been much better in my opinion). Loved it, more soon please.
| Anne Rose 6/9/08 . chapter 18
Wow! an update!
Love how you're weaving in the canon events now that we're caught up to those episodes.
| 1477166 6/9/08 . chapter 18
YAY! update! It's cool you got into Origin now. Awesome story :D
| Fiera Sabre 6/9/08 . chapter 18
Wow...That WAS a bit of a wait, wasn't it? I hadn't realized a whole eight months had passed since the last chapter, but with life and all, I don't blame you.
I must say I am glad that the story will pick up a more regular pace with it's chapters-I missed it!
This was an excellent chapter as always, and I like that you've still kept the bouncy interaction between Daniel and Vala up, even with the added intimacy of their relationship. (I've read the occasional story where something like that happens, and then the conversations just drop off and become rather...lacking. You have, apparently, skipped that bit of trouble.)
Ahem. Anyways, You did a wonderful job on the chappie, and I look forward to more soon!
(And I hope your life gets all settled and less hectic soon!)
| Scifisurfer 6/9/08 . chapter 18
Well, I liked the tone, the Vala and Danielness of it but you've leapt from PU from the get go to AU and now seem ... I say this cautiously to be rejoining the series at the start of the Ori involvement, although obviously with DV in an involved relationship. Hm, will wait and see. And if you're writing two to three chapters a week ...really...? I'll know soon enough. Enjoyed it. Mag.
| EmeraldWings90 6/9/08 . chapter 18
It's been so long, I've almost completely forgot what's this about... Sadly, I'm gonna have to re-read :D
| acer-sigma 6/9/08 . chapter 18
What a pleasant surprise to come across today. Glad to see you're back!
Thought the morning after scene was well done, particularly with the thoughts that were running through Daniel's mind concerning his feelings for Vala.
The attempts to get the bracelets offered a nice little chuckle.
"Well, since mechanical tools were useless, why don’t we try...energy weapons?” Digging through the equipment beside the lab bench, Bill produced a zat gun and a staff weapon with a distinctly enthusiastic flourish.
“No.” The couple said firmly in unison."
Yes, I can just picture the matching looks of horror on the faces of our favorite couple.
Enjoyed Vala's handling of Bill and her greeting to Sam. Obviously Daniel/Vala had quite the morning.
Loved Jack's greeting and Vala playing along. Though really Daniel should probably check to make sure the goddess Not didn't actually create any such bracelets!
"“Only you, Daniel,” he said, still laughing, “only you could get married twice without knowing it.”"
So true, but in his defence, he did have other things on his mind ;
"“You can’t keep milking that.” Cameron argued. “Yeah you missed your flight but you got a girlfriend as a very nice consolation prize, don’t you think that evens out the scales?”"
Daniel has definitely lost any rights to use that excuse ;)
Must say the little trip to Ori land was unexpected. Wasn't sure you were going to go down that path. (And hey...the two people they're occupying are married!) Looking forward to seeing how you'll play out the encounter. I can think of one particular scene that will probably have more of an impact on Daniel than in the original universe. And of course, if she does eventually get pregnant after the Beachhead, you can have fun with questions of paternity ;)
Anyways, enough with my rant. Great chapter as always. Looking forward to the next one, hopefully soon.
| starjems88 6/9/08 . chapter 18
can't wait for the next chapter!