 The Dudette 86 2009-11-13 . chapter 11I've just read chapter 11. And I'm shocked. I hate Namine right now, and... seriously, I cried xD
I mean, poor Axel! I feel so sorry for him! I almost feel like not reading this fanfiction anymore, but something tells me to read on.
btw, I really loved Sex Ed. It was a great story! I was so happy when I saw there was a squeal. But I feel bad for Axel the entire time I read this fic xD
Ah, maybe I'm just crazy xD
But anyways, I love your writing style. It just keeps me reading y'know xD |
 Sheep are Fluffy 2009-09-07 . chapter 25I can't believe its over!! I wasn't paying attention to the chapters and i was like "Holy S* its the last chapter! *sad face*" I love this story so much!
You finally gave Axel (and Roxas) a break i see, good to know. I feel like there could be another sequal to this too, with all the questions i still have, but i like the ending and don't really want it to be ruined.
Till next time.
I'm so lucky, i have school tomarrow and have to go to bed soon and i still finished this!! Oh happy day! -starts singing- |
 Sheep are Fluffy 2009-09-07 . chapter 24"what's this? a sudden change in narrative? holy flaming house plants of justice, batman! what does it mean? well, robin, if you'd wear you underpants in the correct place then i could tell you with a straight face. for now, i leave you to hang. xD
mm. what a night. writing so much DIALOGUE hurts my eyes! forgive me if all of it was confusing. it was all very: "and he's your sister's cousin's grandma's husband's brother's friend's best friend's dog's cat's mother's brother's daughter's uncle's babysitter's mailman twice dead three times removed!!" i mean, really. WHUT?"
I read that like 20 times! XD
This chapter really cleared up alot and i mean ALOT!
Confuzzling, but, all well i can understand this now. |
 Sheep are Fluffy 2009-09-07 . chapter 23Not one to give breaks i see. Poor Axel, will he ever be happy. I feel like Roxas is hiding something...
lol drama drama duck!!
SMEX!(yush it needs 2 lines)
AkuRoku doujinshi scans make life god...-sigh- |
 Sheep are Fluffy 2009-09-07 . chapter 22Gah!! I'm so freaking tired!! I just got home and have sunburn. T^T ...it hurts.
I'm just gonna say i liked the chapter and with i had someone like Roxy. |
 Sheep are Fluffy 2009-09-06 . chapter 21and just when things were looking up. Damn can't they be happy in this?...Guess not. On a second note, why guns? Why can't it be something cool like...a pirate ninja monkey from space with a laser attached to it's head? |
 Sheep are Fluffy 2009-09-06 . chapter 20YAY! No death! Oh happy day!!
Axel's but is D to the E to the L-I-C-I-O-U-S!
I swear to god when you wroting the the A/N "TAKE ME TO KING MICKEY, LIKE, NOW."
I thought it said "TAKE ME KING MICKY, LIKE,NOW!" I couldn't stop laughing!! |
 Sheep are Fluffy 2009-09-06 . chapter 19Riku got Pwn'd! HAHA! I still think Reno is the dad, maybe somehow Marly idk, they both have the hair and eyes. I liked this chapter.
When Larxene came in i whispered to myself "Look out! Prego PMSing ** on the rampage! prepair the missles genreal! We have lock on! Fire!!" lol
Now all Axel has to do is tell them he has AIDs. |
 Sheep are Fluffy 2009-09-06 . chapter 18LOL drunk Roxy!! XD
Yay! I love this chapter the most so far!! |
 Sheep are Fluffy 2009-09-06 . chapter 17HAHA! F you Larxene!(really hate her)
FINALLY! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS POINT THE ENTIRE STORY!
AkuRoku always has to be angsty! Thats what makes it AkuRoku! |
 Sheep are Fluffy 2009-09-06 . chapter 16Hm...not much to say about this chapter.
I made a song for your fic though! (sotra-kinda-maybe)
When you're feeling down, and the world's still around, why do you hide.
When you're feeling alone, but everyone's still there, why do you frown.
Everyone's still afraid, of losing it all, yet there are still smiles.
Why run from it all, when there's still a chance, for a miracle.
All I need is you and your smile.
With it there's a light all the time.
When I'm feeling sad, I go to you.
You are all I need so just be you.
You try to hide yourself, but I see the way, your eyes shine.
A million time, I try to open the cage, but I can't find a light.
A kiss, a hug and a hold, is what I get from you, when I try to break through.
Still I will try, to open up a hole, to my heart for.
Cause, all I need is you and your smile.
With it there's a light all the time.
When I'm feeling sad, I go to you.
You are all I need so just be you.
Its not finished yet, but all well, i can't keep it to myself. ^^ |
 Sheep are Fluffy 2009-09-06 . chapter 15Poor Akuroku. I feel bad for both of them but i do agree with Axel, If someone i loved had that happen and i was involed i wouldn't care about myself i would be ** that they only cared about me and not themself!
Is Larx prego or something? I bet it's Reno's or at least Adyen (i can't spell his name) is since neither Lar or Axe have blue eyes.
I want Sims3 so bad!! I want Akuroku Sims! T^T |
 Sheep are Fluffy 2009-09-06 . chapter 14Axel's isn't allowed to be happy is he...wait. If Axel has had AIDs for 6+ years then wouldn't have Roxas got them the first time? I'm confuzzled. Also, not sure about this but i though it was transfered through blood of something... |
 Sheep are Fluffy 2009-09-06 . chapter 13I knew it! i knew the kid saw!! YAY! SMEX! Axel is fine being soft but i thinks hes hard, in several ways -winkwink- lol |
 Sheep are Fluffy 2009-09-06 . chapter 12I can't tell if Roxas was drunk when he kissed Axel, please don't let him be!! Yay Ayden for disobeying Larxene! Boo Ayden for getting Axel hit by a car! TT^TT Axel just can't seem to get a break, can he? |