Great story! :)

I was so happy to read this because I've always thought that Candice had such potential as a character. Your excellent story proves it.

Interesting. Twisted. Awesomely done.

This is one of the best fanfictions I've read. Very good.

Very interesting. Great writing. Especially the last paragraph and sentence.

Excellent portrayal of a character we've seen so little of in the series so far. I liked the little insights you gave into her previous life and I enjoyed even more her 'relationship' with Peter. The ending took the cake for me. It was unexpected and yet, naturally, there was a build-up there that I could only understand once I'd come to the last lines.

Pretty damn good job.

Whoa.

Oh, wow. This is amazing. I love your Candice... Sarcastic and clever, but not quite clever enough. And Peter is downright terrifying - not so much by intent, but like a force of nature, because of the intensity of his emotions, and you convey how close he is to breakdown. The ending is perfection.

(Here via a rec from Hackthis.)

Am I twisted as well for really liking this?

Does Peter kill Candice (and everyone in reach) in the end? or does he get the power back in control somehow?

great story