Wonderful story! I love Bill and Karen but stories about them have been few and far between. I hope to see more from you two. You collaborate well. I thought you did a great job of portraying their feelings. I love well developed original characters and Elizabeth was wonderful. Thanks for a good read!

WOW! I loved this story! It was so well written and I absolutely adored the last line! Please write more!

A nice story! I liked your portrayal of Bill, it was very much "Bill". Sorry if i'm not making sense. :) And i liked Elizabeth. Good job

Wow, this was terrific, I hope you two keep writing B/K stories because this one was awesome!

Congratulations, great B/K story. Loved new character Elizabeth. Hope we get more from you. Thanks.

So cute! :-)

Wow, this is such an amazing story! You two make an awesome team, and I hope you decide to write more Bill/ Karen because you are really good at it. I also really liked how you developed Elizabeth so well. Sometimes, it can be hard to develop an original character so that the reader feels like they get to know them, but you two did an excellent job at that! Again, brilliant story!