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Reviews for: Don't Be So Obnoxious
Iwannabeahero
2008-05-11 . chapter 5
You should update this. You should really finish this up.
Autumn Skys
2008-01-16 . chapter 5
Very good story so far! I've been looking for some good Karin fics, and there isn't many stories at all, so this was very excellent to read! Update soon, please!
hecate0808
2007-12-30 . chapter 4
awsome!
Sakura-Chan1345
2007-12-01 . chapter 4
Nice story so far! Update soon! :P ^^
Nighttime Mistress
2007-11-12 . chapter 4
Ahh, a very well written fanfic is what I needed right now. You really did make my day. And you also did very great job on this one. Your writing style is very unique. Like nothing that I've ever seen before.

But there's something that gets me. Just when the story is getting real good, I find that each chapter is very short. If they were a bit longer, it would make them a bit more enjoyable. (especially for me anyway. ^.^)

Then again, that Syra sounds like trouble. I don't know why but he sounds so familiar from another anime that I've seen...

Anyway, I'm putting this fic on my story alert so update soon.
Tortured Artist
2007-08-13 . chapter 4
So that is how he's able to survive in sun light. Like the prevoius chapters, this one is fairly good. I can't help but wonder about that Syra guy and I liked Anju's joke about how Karin doesn't get along enough with Syra to be considered friendly enough to go into a shower together.
Ally Marton
2007-08-13 . chapter 4
It seemed like you used the word "gently" a lot. But other than my paranoia for noticing that it was a good chapter! So Syra's going to school with her tomorrow right? That's going to be very interesting. Any-a-who, keep working on it!
dAnnYsGiRl777
2007-07-02 . chapter 3
awesome story r u going to have karin and kenta together or not? update soon!
tashie1010
2007-07-01 . chapter 3
YAY! I really like this chapter and i like the ending. please update soon XD
Ally Marton
2007-06-27 . chapter 3
I like it so far, please continue to write more about it!
tashie1010
2007-06-26 . chapter 2
Aw... this is really good, and i love it, so please update soon, i wanna know what happens between Karin and Syra, cause theres alot of tension... oh its so good! please update soon! XD
NaruHinaforever
2007-06-12 . chapter 2
nice story why won't u contiue it, and this story was, well awesome. hehehe
Ally Marton
2007-06-11 . chapter 2
Heh, it's pretty good. The new character's interesting, are we going to learn more about him?
Tortured Artist
2007-06-08 . chapter 2
Not exactly the best postion for Karin to find yourself. First, Winner, now this Syra guy is hitting on Karin. I wonder how he plans on protecrting himself from the sun. Well, this isn't too bad of a story. I would like to see more.
Ruto Kuntai
2007-05-27 . chapter 1
Well nice work, I found it funny how Karin does not like that creepy doll of Anju's.

Well thank you.

R.K.
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