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Ghostwriter
2009-12-06 . chapter 12
Awesome job. Keep it up. Catch ya on the flip side.
Ice-Princess-Amber
2009-05-06 . chapter 12
Well, this has taken an interesting turn. All I want to do now is hug Azalea. Although I wonder what happened to the other Sylvi. I'm guessing they were eventually killed, and it partially serves them right for what they did to Azalea. Now that Billy's gone, I wonder if he'll be subjected to either physical or emotional torture. The Rangers better bust out soon, or this could get bad.
PinkRangerV
2009-04-15 . chapter 12
YES!
!

(screams in joy)

I've been waiting FOREVER for you to update! And WOW! This is great--nice job!
cmar
2009-04-15 . chapter 12
I'm very happy to see an update to this story! And another great chapter, too. Again Azalea's memories were powerful and disturbing. She's really a character we can care about, unusual for an OC.

Keep up the good work - I hope to see another chapter soon.
PurplePie'sRevenge
2009-02-16 . chapter 11
This is such a great story. Very creative! I hope you continue this...I wanna know what happens to them! Great story thus far.
~KJ
PinkRangerV
2008-12-16 . chapter 10
:O

I know you've probably forgotten a lot of this, since you haven't updated for a while, but more! Write more! This is great! That torture scene last chappie was totally scary. And Azalea is so cute! WRITE MORE!
rosa lunae
2008-07-26 . chapter 11
Incredible. I hope you haven't forgotten about this piece.
cmar
2007-11-08 . chapter 11
What can I say - except this was another wonderful chapter. I really enjoy seeing the Rangers trying to figure out what is going on, and what's been happening to them, and am intrigued by the latest developments with Azalea. The story is so well thought out in every way. Also liked the action, very well described and I could almost feel their frustration and confusion at Tommy's intervention.
PterodactylFirebird
2007-11-04 . chapter 11
Oh me goodness, I missed a chapter too! *slaps wrist*

Anyhoo, I loved A Burning World and Telling Memories. Jason's memory was intense! It made me flinch a little.
I have to admit, I was bouncing around all happy-like when I saw some classic ranger alien-butt-kicking-action lol ;)

I want to give Azalea a hug. I hope she's alright. She seems to suffer a lot more than she's letting on. She's one tough little extraterrestrial.

Great stuff! Looking forward to meeting the animal healer!
Ice-Princess-Amber
2007-10-30 . chapter 11
Okay, very nice! Tommy's sorta back on track, and now the Rangers are starting to think things through. And I guess while it's easy for us to see that Jason was seeing through Azalea's eyes, it wasn't for him. And now the World Burners make an appearance... I wanted them to get their scaly butts handed to them, but I guess that'll be later. And the teaser for the next chapter looks good. I wonder if the tiger/wolf that helped Tommy is the same was the animal that Kim saw. Can't wait to get my questions answered!
GinaStar
2007-10-29 . chapter 11
Well done! Hmm...How did I manage to miss a chapter? GR...Stupid email program! Loved it!
Cranelove
2007-10-28 . chapter 11
Ok, since I always forget to review, let's make a general good one.
Where do I start? I love the originality of the plot, a great, new fresh idea. Excellent written, with a perfect development of the characters, always keeping the excitement and the dark side of the story, but also giving us a little part of their personalities, and the interactions as a group.
Personally I love how at first Trini was like the one at charge, but now seems to be Kim, you are making them act according the situation, and showing the different skills they have, and how they can be strong when someone is down. IMO, that's what make them a team. The story is kind of confusing in some parts, I hate that I don't know where they are, who has them, what the hell is really going on; but the plot and your writing are so great that I can't help but to stay tuned.
Excellent job, wish there were more writers like you in the site, but well at least we can have your amazing idea.

Keep it up, and update soon please, can't wait to know more.

Mili
rapunzl
2007-10-26 . chapter 11
Fantastic chapter. As always, the characters are very true to themselves (although I know that Kim/Tommy aren't big on the PDA, it was still very cute). :)

I can't help but think that whoever it was that performed the memory implantations, it was *not* the World Burners. Everything (we assume) the Burners have done hurts the rangers - their massive injuries, Trini's parasites, Tommy's 12-hr mental torture session... they all test the rangers' extreme physical and mental boundaries. However, the memories seem to be more... benign. I can't see how they would fit into the Burners' plan.

Looking forward to more fun! :)
Dagmar Buse
2007-10-26 . chapter 11
Very nice installment -- the plot thickens, obviously. Looking forward to more!

(And what do you mean, THE Dagmar Buse? There is only one of me ...)
jps1926
2007-10-26 . chapter 11
Of course only Kim could bring Tommy out of his confusion. 'Therapy with a kiss', that's cute. The pieces to this puzzle are really coming together. I'm a little surprised that Jason didn't pick up that his vision was Azalea's . Ooh, and we got to witness some action. I just hope Tommy was right. Thanks for kind of revealing two things in the teaser, Billy's disappearance, and that there is an animal helping them. Can't wait for that.
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