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| i-luv-zack 2008-06-16 ch 1,  | abuseI am a big fan of AI and I love what you have done with it. DAVID IS ALIVE! I cried during the part with the blue fairy in AI and I'm so glad that David is alive. I hope he finds Monica and Joe. Or you could make it a sad where he dies, but after he finds Monica,that would work too. Keep up the good work! :) |
| carnageincminor 2008-06-02 ch 7, | abuseAmazing story. I especially liked the way you wrote Angelo's end. I hope you keep writing this, I'd love to find out what happens. |
| charmedchica234 2008-02-28 ch 2, | abuseOh... so sad. I do hope he gets to see Monica soon. |
| charmedchica234 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseOMG I love it! Especialy how you have him start with spinich. I cant wait to read more but right now I have to go to class. I will finish it soon though and let you know what I think. |
| Juul-CP-333 2007-11-09 ch 6, | abuseI'm sorry if these numerous reviews bother you, but I have to respond to this. "Alive" is so compelling! Such a damned good story! I have no idea Jeggs was mecha! I thought he was some old hick out in the woods! And Lord Johnson Johnson being a "God" to the mecha? Dang! Who'd ever think that?! Nice! -JUUL |
| Juul-CP-333 2007-11-09 ch 2, | abuseWow, I have to admit, this is way better than any "A.I" fanfiction I've ever written... then again, I haven't written one in going on 3 years. I admire your writing style and I like how you made David react to becoming "real." I also like the interaction between him and Angelo, it's real cool! Keep up the good work! -JUUL |
| HiBob 2007-09-16 ch 6, | abuseBegin with an absurd concept, then procede logically from there. The result is a very interesting story. |
| Eugena70 2007-08-16 ch 4, | abuseThree words: Beautiful, Beautiful work. I couldn't stop reading until the end. It was as if I was actually watching a revised version of the movie! Thank you so much. |
| ZenPotter 2007-07-29 ch 4, | abusevery good, I just saw AI and I absolutely loved it and your story is very good, creative. please update soon. I want to know what Monica and the others might do |
| Ari Rue 2007-07-23 ch 3, | abuseDesperately awaiting Chapter 4. Your story is fascinating and very well crafted. |