|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Jommy23 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseOkay let me just say this was hilarious! I loved Peter in this. Made me laugh so hard I almost fell out of my seat. |
| Elliesmeow 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseLOL That was awesome! Poor Peter certainly had his hands full trying to fend off a drunken Claire. I thought it was really funny that he'd have gone for it if she'd been dressed as a cheerleader. LOL That was too good. -Ellie |
| Bluie Twilight Star 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abusehehehe |
| Silver^Pegasus 2007-05-26 ch 1, | abuseThe story was good, but I couldn't help but notice maybe the rating was wrong, I think maybe it should be higher then K+ just based on the content of the story, I liked the way that you left spaces between paragraphs to make it easier for the reader to read. |
| Selene 2007-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was nice. The enjoyment factor would've been higher if there weren't grammatical errors. Nothing turns me off faster than the misuse of "you're" from "your" or "too" and "to". You used YOUR instead of your and TO instead of TOO every single time, it made me cringe. You should correct those, your story would be better that way. |