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Matt.P.R
2008-09-06 . chapter 6
dude i love the story but its been like a year so come on update man.
Tori Hoshi
2008-08-20 . chapter 6
Love this story
Fox-Sama
2007-12-16 . chapter 6
cool chapter
CrazyNinjaPenguin
2007-11-26 . chapter 6
Not a bad chapter. The new OC seems somewhat interesting. I'm still curious to see the direction this story is headed because right now it doesn't seem to be going anywhere. I don't know, it just seems like there's nothing really driving the plot; Hinata and Sakura are already together, there isn't some underlying compelling mystery, nor is there any real high impact drama. Basically all this story has going for it is character interaction, both between the established characters and the OCs. Of course you've written those interactions (and the story as a whole thus far) quite well. I just can't find this story as compelling as Like Mother, Like Daughter. I'd still like to see more of it. Perhaps these new OCs will bring something to the story. Oh, and more cute Sakura X Hinata moments would be nice. Keep up the good work.
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only
2007-11-26 . chapter 6
...I LUV the way u described Sakura flipping Kiba off!
calicat1313
2007-11-26 . chapter 6
hey do you think you could write a TsunadexShizune fic next?
LordViral
2007-11-26 . chapter 6
Thanks for the props man! Excellent chapter as well!! You really know your way around an Oc. Let me know If you need any more, I'll be able to get something cooked up in a instant if you need me to.

Also You've got me hooked here. I check back daily to see if any of your stories have been updated! Keep up your grand work!

Lord Viral
LordViral
2007-11-22 . chapter 5
Nice job with the story so far. It seems that the caracters aren't giving you any problems. I Like this and whenever you need more characters, let me know. I'll be glad to get something made up for you.

Keep up the excellent work! */_\* (lolz itachi)
Fox-Sama
2007-10-02 . chapter 5
this chapter was not that bad a least we all know that Neji is a good guy.
CrazyNinjaPenguin
2007-10-01 . chapter 5
Kinda short and dry. Sure it was cute but it was really pretty uneventful. Still, I'm glad to see it continue nonetheless and hope to see more soon.
Daisuke1991
2007-10-01 . chapter 5
and flames will be used to heat my house LOL

any way can't wait for the next chapter
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only
2007-10-01 . chapter 5
I hope there'll b a yuri lemon next chappie! It's going great so far!
AJW1893
2007-10-01 . chapter 5
i like the chapter. a break from the sex, gore, and violence is good once and a while. you really know how to use descriptions. your writing has REALLY improved since ur first story. i am going to start interviewing authers and post them on my profile so if you want to be interviewed, just tell me. AND I REALLY WANT TO HELP WRITE A CHAPTER! PLEASE LET ME WRITE A CHAPTER WITH YOU! i know you don't need any help, but i really want to help write a chapter. and do you play halo 3 LIVE? if so just tell me or add RS PLAYER. thats my GT. i CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! and hurry up on the ask the cast story! i really want to see that bitch(safira) get tortured for calling me a pervert. ha ha ha. i have vaugly heard of megatokyo. is that from Akira? or is that NeoTokyo? w/e again, if you wanna be interviewed, just PM me.

AJW1893
Mistyasha
2007-10-01 . chapter 5
No, this was a cute chapter and I'd read it again if I didn't have work to do. Please write more cuteness, but do make it longer.
Daisuke1991
2007-09-29 . chapter 4
That was awesome nice itachi scene at the end
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