please write more on this story! I really like it and would love to read more.

This is great! Please continue with it!

Ok, so I think you are doing a really good job on this story. And that you should update soon. Really soon.
Athena

I really like your story so far, and the entire concept. I *think* I read the other version (or at least something like it) and you are doing a lot better.
Kepp Writing!
Athena