GOOD STORY ESPECUALLTT THE ENDING! I LAUGHED SO BADLY!

great job XD

so cute!

Ha ha! Anna!

Lol, Silva recording it! Hehe, I am suprised that Ren was not yelling his head off at Silva. It was great!

cute...heh heh heh...but, morty? *cries at the lame name* why couldn't they have left his name as manta? (meaning the translators)

hahaha anna the closet yaoi fan XD

That.. was.. *SPLASHING NOSE BLEED OUT* so H.O.T ! _

Ah ! _ Cant stop nosebleeding! AAH! WHERES TISSUE?

*Jumpin around* KYA !

I can't stop laughing So cool, Oh I love Ren (not as much as Hao but) It was really good Fav

omfg Yoh and Hao had a nosebleed! MUAHAHAH! priceless, XD -whieps tear off her eyes- you made me crack up so bad XD

omg...every one was watching! XD and i mean EVERYONE! that was fun to read...i loved it! and i think Anna is sick XD

ha! silva recorded it! hey,...silva can i borrow your video camara?

Silva: yoh deleted it already...

god damn mother fucking bitch. anyway,...anna's a perv!

Anna: says you.

yes says me...

A: wipe the blood of your face.

what! where?

A: sucker.

bitch.

that was so cool! i love ren on top!

Ending was HILARIOUS and cheesy at the same time.

LOL! That was hilarious at the end! It was a really good lemon too! It gave me shivers every now and then, Weird.