beautiful, lucid and utterly brilliant. perfect.

I loved this!

Awsome story! You are an excellent writer! Amazing!

Nice ficlet...the idea that the bugs are telepathic is cool and would explain how the wraith get that ability as a hybrid human/bug. Hope you write again soon!

Very eloquent--I love how smoothly you've woven together Shep's human thoughts with his Iratus feelings. Well done!

This is a wonderful story idea (brilliant to have him 'almost understand' the iratus chittering), it truly moved me. I loved Shep's POV in this, his interaction with the bugs, and his care for the eggs/babies in the end almost made me cry.
Gorgeously written, great work of yours, Lauriel!

Nicely done! The contrast between the two worlds he is bridging was masterfully done. A true fight within himself, an honest one. Great work. Thanks - Miran

O that was really really cool!