Reviews for Harry Potter & His Inheritance Repaired

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Mari92 2008-07-09 ch 19,	abuseyou're awesome! I couldn't keep me away from this story since I started to read it a couple of hours ago. Hope you upload next chapter soon 'cause I'm going to sit on needles until you do.
jabarber69 2008-07-06 ch 19,	abuseHey I just read this story and I was blown away...WoW and Wow again. I found it quite the interesing story, very entertaining and I enjoyed it immensly. But what happen, looked like from your summary or notes that you were gonna update quite often and looks like you did but then you didnt finish!?! I also saw you incorporated other peoples ideals into your story, and first of all I dont see anything wrong with that, I have used other peoples ideals too in my stories and as long as you dont copy word for word what they write and take that ideal into your own direction for your story...I mean its funny when all those authors start to scream about you taking their ideal, when every one of us that write hp fanfiction took the hp universe ideal from rowling herself! I did notice something though, in I believe chapter 7 right after harry and remus leave the bank after he recieves the rings, they go shopping, he buys in one store bunch of foe glasses, great big pensieve and a multi compartment trunk and at another store he buys a ancient thousand year old snake called seth and then bonds with it, then later just before harry went into the four year/one month training he had his lawyer get him a snake that he named seth and who was old and they bonded...I figured you must of forgotten that you had already bought a snake earlier and called it seth? then I believe when he went shopping on day before sept 1st he bought a multi compartment trunk, foe glasses and pensieve...again I figure you forgot that he had already done that! Now there is only one thing to say...PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS!
nwendrot 2008-06-27 ch 19,	abuseupdate update update update! i really like your story so plz continue it. thanks a lot nwendrot
autumn-annette-19 2008-06-18 ch 19,	abuseWhats next, whats next.
DragonFire Princess 2008-06-08 ch 19,	abuselove the story! hope you update soon!
lantana 2008-06-06 ch 6,	abuseFirst of all, I love your story, make no mistake about that, and I WILL continue reading it, no matter what. One thing though: did you ever consider taking a beta, to help you with your spelling? I get the impression you really love to write, and write fast, the story seems to pour from your brain straight through your fingers on the screen - but unfortunately your fingers seem to stumble sometimes along the way. While I admire this (with no small amount of jealousy I must admit) the many errors make it much harder to read. With the help of a beta, who would weed out those pesky typo's, this could be an even greater story than it now is!! OK, now I've nagged enough about the only negative point, I'll congratulate you again on your original twist on the story, the lively manner in which you describe everything, and just continue reading...
Mazakai 2008-05-11 ch 1,	abusewow, i really enjoyed this story so far (i've read all of it even if it says im reviewing for chapter one, dont worry!) the duel with malfoy was priceless, and ironic since i was listening to the chamber of secrets soundtrack as i read this! i really love what you've done so far, so please update again soon! you've really got something here! ~Maz.
SpringCherryBlossom 2008-03-27 ch 19,	abuse...uh...is Alicia really Draco?? LOL I have no clue why I think that!! :D
Elfwyn 2008-03-25 ch 19, anon.	abuseI love superpower Harry, but I must admit your inheritance portion was different. I hope you pick this back up soon or put it up for adoption if you are abandoning your work. One question though, at the start Harry was ** at the wizarding world, even it seemed Ron and Hermoine, and left, supposedly for good. Why did he change his mind?
Draeconin 2008-03-13 ch 5,	abuseOkay... TOTALLY over the top. I'm done.
SeaBreeze 2008-02-25 ch 19, anon.	abuseVery good story I have enjoyed it quite a bit. Can't wait to read more, please update soon. Thanks SeaBreeze :-)
Lady FireMage 2008-01-20 ch 19,	abusehey this is really good. please update
ioname2you 2007-12-29 ch 19,	abusebrilliant story can't wait to see how alicia and harry date goes hope to see a new chapter soon
c 2007-12-22 ch 1, anon.	abusewow, one of the best i've read so far, can't wait for the next chapter, please hurry :^)
Kno Won 2007-12-17 ch 5, anon.	abuseit says that they will each give you two presents I have all the information which the word presents here seems out of place. this paragraph contains many important and many life altering serious issues, gifts fits abit better but it still seems lacking >.< sorry lol

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