 Sand-Jounin-Temari 2008-09-04 . chapter 1i know it was depressing but i found it a little happy.. i mean like.. temari got to go home after all... still i cried *Sniff* |
 Blonde-Existentialist 2008-06-09 . chapter 1Its funny, extremist environments can create some extreme emotional bonds that people often never escape. When you grow up one place all your life, you'll always be engraved there(bad pun non-intended). |
 Selonianth Shinjitsu 2008-01-15 . chapter 1its a very good 6 word fanfic |
 Tessen-hime 2007-12-01 . chapter 1I should have read this last. Amazingly well written, but sad all the same! *tears up* |
 InosBane 2007-11-30 . chapter 1Beautiful all the same. |
 Jibril's Avatar 2007-10-17 . chapter 1That was devastating. And very beautifully written; I really like the way you experiment with different styles / themes of writing - 'I Must Paint You' was hilarious, almost a crackfic. And the Kiba one (I forget its name), your NejiTens, etc, they really demonstrate a refusal to conform to the norm. Well done! |
 Zetnnik 2007-09-25 . chapter 1A bleak future for the sand sibs. :(
Good story though. Well written. |
 Morgaine of the Faeries 2007-09-18 . chapter 1 Oh. My. Gosh.
That was beautiful, especially Gaara's final stand, and Temari's grave. There are some things you could have also put in about how people of the desert feel, although anyone who isn't probably wouldn't miss it (like Temari, I'm a desert child, so I guess it connected even better with me). But...wow.
--Morgie |
 Mystica83 2007-09-11 . chapter 1I must admit, one of the most beautiful fics I've ever read. |
 fang shinobi 2007-07-15 . chapter 1oh the harsh life of a ninja... so sad... T_T |
 Lyndal 2007-06-05 . chapter 1Beautifully written, especially the ending. You had the right amount of detail to make it understandable, and the feelings of Temari were conveyed really well. |
 Kane Shi Megami 2007-05-28 . chapter 1Depressing? Yeah but very worth reading. Like the idea of her tombstone being her fan. *thumbs up* Good job!
KSM |
 i luv u -im bored- 2007-05-27 . chapter 1*sniff* *sniff* so sad but good though very good story i luv it |
 Ddriana 2007-05-27 . chapter 1That was a very nice fic :) The sense of, well, if not doom then close to it, was there from the very beginning. I especially like the way that Shikamaru refused to recognize that Temari also kept returning to Suna, turning his own reasoning against him. |
 NOT AFRAID OF SPIDERS! GO ME! 2007-05-27 . chapter 1 That was... actually very, very good. |