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Reviews for: The Desert
Sand-Jounin-Temari
2008-09-04 . chapter 1
i know it was depressing but i found it a little happy.. i mean like.. temari got to go home after all... still i cried *Sniff*
Blonde-Existentialist
2008-06-09 . chapter 1
Its funny, extremist environments can create some extreme emotional bonds that people often never escape. When you grow up one place all your life, you'll always be engraved there(bad pun non-intended).
Selonianth Shinjitsu
2008-01-15 . chapter 1
its a very good 6 word fanfic
Tessen-hime
2007-12-01 . chapter 1
I should have read this last. Amazingly well written, but sad all the same! *tears up*
InosBane
2007-11-30 . chapter 1
Beautiful all the same.
Jibril's Avatar
2007-10-17 . chapter 1
That was devastating. And very beautifully written; I really like the way you experiment with different styles / themes of writing - 'I Must Paint You' was hilarious, almost a crackfic. And the Kiba one (I forget its name), your NejiTens, etc, they really demonstrate a refusal to conform to the norm. Well done!
Zetnnik
2007-09-25 . chapter 1
A bleak future for the sand sibs. :(
Good story though. Well written.
Morgaine of the Faeries
2007-09-18 . chapter 1
Oh. My. Gosh.
That was beautiful, especially Gaara's final stand, and Temari's grave. There are some things you could have also put in about how people of the desert feel, although anyone who isn't probably wouldn't miss it (like Temari, I'm a desert child, so I guess it connected even better with me). But...wow.
--Morgie
Mystica83
2007-09-11 . chapter 1
I must admit, one of the most beautiful fics I've ever read.
fang shinobi
2007-07-15 . chapter 1
oh the harsh life of a ninja... so sad... T_T
Lyndal
2007-06-05 . chapter 1
Beautifully written, especially the ending. You had the right amount of detail to make it understandable, and the feelings of Temari were conveyed really well.
Kane Shi Megami
2007-05-28 . chapter 1
Depressing? Yeah but very worth reading. Like the idea of her tombstone being her fan. *thumbs up* Good job!

KSM
i luv u -im bored-
2007-05-27 . chapter 1
*sniff* *sniff* so sad but good though very good story i luv it
Ddriana
2007-05-27 . chapter 1
That was a very nice fic :) The sense of, well, if not doom then close to it, was there from the very beginning. I especially like the way that Shikamaru refused to recognize that Temari also kept returning to Suna, turning his own reasoning against him.
NOT AFRAID OF SPIDERS! GO ME!
2007-05-27 . chapter 1
That was... actually very, very good.
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