ooh wow! post soon you write really well x

I know that it was a while ago since you posted this, but I loved it. Please keep writing I liked the plot. And I hope that Ryan and Marissa aren’t making a mistake. I would love to read more of this.

post soon!

awesome drabble

hope 2 c more soon

I like your writing style. It's kind of intense.

I hope they aren't making a mistake. But I have a feeling they are, because they are just hooking up, like you wrote in the beginning, and I want R/M having sex to mean more than that. But of course they can't resist each other, especially since they aren't even together. I hope you continue this, it has great promise!

OMG that was great! PLEASE post soon! I really love all your fics/ficlets...they're so different than anything on here. Again, PLEASE post soon! LOL.

The second part should be interesting. post soon