Lol! This is the first Saiunkoku fic I've come across that I read through to the end, and it got quite a laugh out of me! Well done. I heart Ryuuren.

haha! that's so typical of Ryuuren!
love it! lol

HAHAHAHAHAAH i have not laughed that hard in a while. loved the ending, from the "first kiss" bit till ryuuren's new lifetime achievement! GENIUS!

*whimpers*
ah.. how I would love it so much if they had...continued
not that I don't like it like this~
so funny~~
xD
Makes me think Ryuuren's a bit evil tho~~
puts Shuuei in an awkward position, no?
x3

That really was FUNNY! Honestly, that part about Ryuuren destroying his brothers' relationships even before they started, that really had me in splits... good job and keep it up!

Ryuuren! This fic makes me fall in love with him all over again. I love this fic!

HAHAHAHAHA! Nice! Well, I'm sure Kouyuu felt something :D Only that the order of their "coupling" got screwed up... But with Kouyuu it's not surprising >.

hahahaha... that was just too funny... i love kouyuuxshuuei.. i also love ryuuren!! hihihi..

that was adorable,fluffy, and fun and i loved the ending^^

u know what?? i'm blamung ur story for making my jaw hurts so much from laughing... hahaha... that was HILARIOUS! i love your kouyuu, shuuei and ryuuren! in was very well portrayed... love it...

"paint a picture. it lasts longer." hahaha... funny... u should copyright that line... hehehe...

anyways... all in all... I LOVE IT!

*more*more*more*more*more*more*more*more*more*more*more*more*

O~h ♥ you have such a way with words :D
i love the conversation in the beginning between ryuuren and shuuei, but the ending rocks! lmao. i love your characterization of kouyuu best :D

XD That was hilarious, especially the last bit. I wish for more Shuuei/Kouyuu fics XD

What a nice trick... just the way Ryuuren is!
Liked it...

WAI! dude, that was the CUTEST. My ears are burning and my jaw hurts from smiling. KYA! i love it. And your Ryuuren was perfect!! mwahahaahhaa!

LOL~! Loved it! HEehe Ryuuren could be so mischievous and people wouldn't even suspect mucH~! HAHAH He got his Foolish elder brother the fourth good~! WOO!