Very nice story!

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BOOYAH! Don't under estimate Atem! *Performs the dance of victory and happiness* Not only did he take out 2 of Aknadin's minions, he foiled his uncle's ultimate evil plan! HA HA! Thank you so much for putting this story up, it has got to be the best Atem story out there and anyone who hasn't read it is missing out on ALOT! *sighs happily* I love it when the bad guy under estimates the little guy. It just makes things that much more interesting when they get their butts handed to them *evil grin*. Anyway, the emotions in here are outstanding and I LOVE their characters and reactions! you have talent so Keep Writing, and don't take this story off! It would be a sad sad day to see this story disappear... *gets on knees and looks up pleadingly* Please, May we read some more?

Whoa! What a wonderful story! It had so many great moments! It made me laugh, made me cry, put into deep thought, and nearly had me on the edge of my seat at every chapter! This story was truly a god among all stories in Yu-Gi-Oh fanfiction! I wish you the best of luck with your fanfic career, and congrats on this incredible work of art!

I love it and sequel?

Your story is awesome! I can't believe that you've only got 37, excluding mine, reviews!

hey, i thought u had a sequel to prince of eygypt king of games? or did u take it down? cause it u did then, well damn... oh well, its been a great story, and i hope to see more stories from you ^_^

i loved reading this.it was so good,and so heart touching too.and not to mention fun to read and laugh at.^^
see ya!^^
TT

that was a brilliant story! make a sequal ok?

Great chapter, great story. You story made me laugh, cry get angry and very happy. Great work.

Good chapter. Kepura certainly redeemed himself.

Darn, that chapter brought tears to my eyes even though i know what happens. Good chapter.

Poor Atem. He is really in a bad spot good thing one of those men is not evil. Good chapter.

Good chapter. The animals are on the search now. I hope Pakhet finds that bastard.

Good chapter. Too bad he gave Aknadin a warning. Hopefully, they will catch him soon.

Good chapter. I wonder what the children will do.