Oh my, that was certainly... Different, but in a good way. I like the way you worded it, good job.

It is interesting and wonderfully random. Too bad its not longer, I can see the makings of an 'epic'(I hate this word, but could not think of anything else.) story.

Max: Wow. Just... Wow... That's really all I can say... O_O It's very well written. It leaves you wondering what's going to happen after every sentence. In my opinion, one of the BEST one-shot's I have read yet! O_O *Huggles* It's very good dear!
Lovies,
Mew Max
Aka: SlytherinMax (Vampy-Kitty-Snake Hybrid)

Wow amazing. Kind of confusing but amazingly poignant.

Wow. I'm totally speechless. That was very good and I've never read something quite so short and invigorating. You have quite a way with words, I was unsure who you were speaking of until the end. And what an ending it is! That's quite a loop you threw! Harry Potter and Severus Snape, lovers?
Wow... And to compare the man to a god? Inspiring. Wonderful job!