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| Sunrise Sets 2007-06-14 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice. |
| Eryn Goddess of Chaos 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseHey! Don't be so sad just yet. There's a FOURTH one coming out. Next year. =) My friend's mom's friend -mouthful x.x;- was an extra in the fourth one. They somehow filmed it at the same time...Anywho look forward to another Jack Sparrow adventure. ^.^ |
| Lady Charity 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abuseImpressive! I got a heads up about this story from dannyphantomSG1, and this was very in-depth and well-written. I love how he thought of them as children (and considering their age, it's technically true) because it shows just how innocent and important they are to him. Thanks! |
| Galinda05 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is so very well written, it was an excellent read (even if it was really sad! :( -Galinda |
| Peeka-chan 2007-05-28 ch 1, | abuseYeah, I agree with you about the movie. Jack got off WAY too easy, and then Will and Elizabeth had a kid who didn't know who his father looked like for the first 10 years of his life. But yes, the third movie was great, almost as good as the first. This oneshotwas very in character and believeable, and I think it's great! |
| Kipcha 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseIt sounds like you made Jack think Will was just an object, but I think he really cared about Will. After all, did you see the look on his face when Will was stabbed? But it was well written. |
| Sora Sotara 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseWow. I have absolutely no clue what is going on because I haven't seen the movie but I do have to say that your work was really good. |
| Contraltissimo 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseOh wow... that was incredible. I loved that scene (yes I'm just dark like that). You got into Jack's head beautifully! The anger, the confusion, the frustration... the impossible choices needing to be made... right now! Amazing job. This is going on my favorites. |
| Rowena Blackwing 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseYou so well captured Jack's thoughts in that scene. Beautiful. two thumbs up. (Actually, I would give more, but I'm not a mutant) oh, and yes, I do think that Jack would think "How completely un-Jack Sparrow-ish that was." |
| acacia59601 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseGreat little story! The look on Jack's face in that scene was so emotional that I couldn't believe it was Jack. |
| izzfrogger 2007-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseOM! That was REALLY good. You got the feelings and emotions perfect :):):) I seem to love anyone with the name captain jack! (i got to see potc 3 twice in 2 days!) |
| Danny Phantom SG-1 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseFinally! I was waiting for someone to write this scene from the characters' perspectives. This is great! I absolutely loved that movie. Will is my favorite character, but I'm odd and like it when my fave characters are in distress, so...the movie was perfect...as is this little oneshot! Great job! --DPSG1 |
| SugarQuill Cutie 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abusei loved it! Do u by any chance know wut jones said before he stabbed will? something about being cruel in reply to what jack said? i don't remebr but its driving me crazy now. Good job on ur one shot, nicely written and fits with what went on in the movie very well. |
| trust kill trust 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abusei liked it. though Jack isn't my fav. character Will is. i hated the end of AWE. all in all i loved the movie though |
| sUnKiSsT 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! |