A great story. Very good.

Oh, angsty. Very nice. Thanks for sharing!

NICE oneshot! I never thought Jack could be so...emotional and self-sacrificing. Good job. :)

Very nice.

Hey! Don't be so sad just yet. There's a FOURTH one coming out. Next year. =) My friend's mom's friend -mouthful x.x;- was an extra in the fourth one. They somehow filmed it at the same time...Anywho look forward to another Jack Sparrow adventure. ^.^

Impressive! I got a heads up about this story from dannyphantomSG1, and this was very in-depth and well-written. I love how he thought of them as children (and considering their age, it's technically true) because it shows just how innocent and important they are to him. Thanks!

This is so very well written, it was an excellent read (even if it was really sad! :(

-Galinda

Yeah, I agree with you about the movie. Jack got off WAY too easy, and then Will and Elizabeth had a kid who didn't know who his father looked like for the first 10 years of his life. But yes, the third movie was great, almost as good as the first.


This oneshotwas very in character and believeable, and I think it's great!

It sounds like you made Jack think Will was just an object, but I think he really cared about Will. After all, did you see the look on his face when Will was stabbed?

But it was well written.

Wow. I have absolutely no clue what is going on because I haven't seen the movie but I do have to say that your work was really good.

Oh wow... that was incredible. I loved that scene (yes I'm just dark like that). You got into Jack's head beautifully! The anger, the confusion, the frustration... the impossible choices needing to be made... right now!

Amazing job. This is going on my favorites.

You so well captured Jack's thoughts in that scene. Beautiful. two thumbs up. (Actually, I would give more, but I'm not a mutant)
oh, and yes, I do think that Jack would think "How completely un-Jack Sparrow-ish that was."

Great little story! The look on Jack's face in that scene was so emotional that I couldn't believe it was Jack.

OM! That was REALLY good. You got the feelings and emotions perfect :):):) I seem to love anyone with the name captain jack!
(i got to see potc 3 twice in 2 days!)

Finally! I was waiting for someone to write this scene from the characters' perspectives. This is great! I absolutely loved that movie. Will is my favorite character, but I'm odd and like it when my fave characters are in distress, so...the movie was perfect...as is this little oneshot! Great job!
--DPSG1