Because of the update date, I've expected that you've stopped updating this story, and that it's on extended hiatus or discontinued...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

This is the best story I've seen in POTC fanfiction so far, and I definitely want to see more! I just love the events and the chemistry and relationship between Will and Elizabeth.

GIMME MORE!

please?

Planning on finishing it? It truly is a beautiful story- well done : )

I fence myself as well but I don't really think there is too much jargon. Then again, I might not have noticed that there was any until you pointed it out so I'm probibly not the best person to ask. Anyway, I really love the story and definitly think the fencing terms make it seem more authentic and realistic. :)

this is my first review of your work. I found the story already completed to this point so here goes. I am quite enjoying your take on the history and COTBP. It is interesting to see things all from Will's POV and I like the way you write him. I hope you can finish it off in spite of how busy you are and I look forward to reading more.

This was a great chapter! It was great to see an update! This is just so well written, and I loved the bit where Will told Jack what to do, that was great.

awesome story! keep it up, its kind of like what they didnt show in the movie,like the backstage stugg that went on that they didnt have time to show in the movie...just update soon!

Ah, William is so great. Gotta love him here, rock-solid among all the... disgustingness. P Nice chapter!

Aww, reading this story always manages to make me love Will a little more, with the way you portray his thoughts. :)

Don't worry about the delays in updating, because I have the same problem. It's not writer's block, exactly, but I just never seem to be in the right mood for writing, y'know?

I hear you're retiring. While it saddens me- because you wrote some awesome stuff- I understand why you'd want to move on. We'll miss you, mate!

Good job! I liked Will's characterizationl; it was realistic and fit well with canon!

TET

i'm glad that i stumbled across this lovely little fic! i look forward to an update!

well, I'm glad you only think that this chapter is fifty years late, because it feels more like TWO HUNDRED.

However, I am very very VERY glad that you updated.

I loved this chapter.

One thing missing: The mini-sequence where Gibbs tells Will about why people know so little about Jack before he arrived in Tortuga. The only reason I wish to mention this is because one of my favorite moments in that movie (other than ALL OF THEM, of course) is when Will does his Jack impression.

Still, AWESOME CHAPPIE.

Update soon!

Rowena Blackwing

P.S. Happy (early) Halloween!

So funny, I was just thinking about this story today, and wondered what was going on with it. And lo and behold you have updated! Hooray!

I can't wait for the next installment. Good work!

Hooray! You finally updated. And it's okay that this chapter was short because it was still awesome. You portray Will's attitude in COTBP really well.

I can't wait until you update again! Take all the time you need.

:)

Really good chapter darling.